AM/FM 23rd

By Chirsdavis F. Neal

Scene Interior Sally’s apartment bath room

{SALLY STANDS AND STAIRS AT A PREGNANCY TEST STRIP WAITING FOR THE RESULTS FROM THE TEST.}

Sally: God dang it hurry up.

Scene Interior Mall of America.

{IT’S BEEN ALONG DAY OF WORK FOR MATT, DAN AND JACK.  LITTLE IS WAITING FOR THEM THERE GOING TO THE 500 HUNDRED TICKET TO MEET SALLY.  THERE WORKING THERE WAY UP THERE.}

Matt: I hear that Sally has some big news for us.

Little: I am guessing she wants to get back to gather with me!

Jack: I wonder how her date with Hector went she was very reserved in class not saying  a thing that wasn’t over the mike.

Dan: Have you guys been to the Five Hundred Ticket since the club incident?

Jack: Well My dad got Jill off the hock.  Yup he’s that damn good! But I hope she is not to made at us.  Or at me for that matter. 

{THEY WALK FOR A WAYS AND COME TO THE CLUB THEY WALK IN SEE THERE NORMAL TABLE AND SEE SALLY SETTING WITH HER SISTER APPARENTLY CRYING HER EYES OUT.  THE GUYS SIT DOWN AND START TO COMFORT HER.}

Little: What did Hector Forth do Sally!

Jill: I’ll tell you what he did he got her pregnant.

Dan: And let me guess he wants nothing to do with it?

Sally: No quit the opposite.  He wants to get hitched!  But

{SALLY STARTS BALLING AGIAN.}

Sally: I don’t know if he’s the one and..

Matt: Fear of commitment 

Sally: It all happened so fast the date was perfect it’s what I wanted the popular guy in high school mooning over me and well one thing led to another and well.

Dan: But it’s not what you wanted..

Little: Sally?

Sally: Still got the ring Little.

Jill: Do you really want to do this Little.  It’s not yours!

Dan: Boy commitment and a baby with out even doing the Deed Little you all right with this.

Little: I have all ways thought about this day but not like this!

Sally: Yes or no?

Little: You want to go to Niagara Falls?

Sally: Why?

Little: Cause thats ware people get Hitched it’d be great we can go over the falls in a Barrel and hell if we survive then it was meant to be.  What do you think?

Sally Why the hell not.  But can we do the ring thing before that?

Little: Oh what the hell Sally Bird would you take the plunge with me.

{LITTLE TAKES OUT A LITTLE BOX OPENS IT IN SIDE THERE IS RING WITH A LITTLE DIMOND ON IT AND A GOLD NECKLESS  THREW THE LOOP.}

Little: Sorry didn’t know the size when I got it 

Jill: Have you had that in your pocket the hole time?

Little: Ever since Matt and I made that bet yes.

Dan: I think that’s another Mathematically calculated bet that Matt lost?

Matt: Not quite!  They still have to get legally married before they graduate college!  And hey if they get married after that I wish them the best of luck.

Scene Interior we are in Dans apartment.

{DAN GETS UP  FEEDS K AND THEN WALKS HIM AND PLAYS WITH HIM HE IS WALKING K DOWN TO THE SCHOOL WARE HE IS ABOUT TO PICK UP HARVEY FOR THERE HR. IT IS A BRISK FALL DAY SEPTEMBER.  HARVEY IS WAITING FOR HIM.}

Harvey: So who is this?

{HARVEY BENDS OVER PETS K.  K YIPPS IN DELIGHT.} 

Dan: This is K and the reason I brought him was to see if you were interested in something?

Harvey: What?

Dan: I was thinking of volunteering like I do.  One way people are going to respect you is if you do things out in the community.

Harvey: But what can I do I am a kid?

Dan: You can do a lot!  Ever thought of Clover Kids?

Harvey: Ya I think about it.  A lot of my friends are in it.

Dan: Right there you are going to give back to the community greatly if you join and you will strengthen your bound with friends.  Hey have you done any digging up on your Great Grand Father?

Harvey: Ya he was a Mechanic in the air force he worked on planes in Great Britain.

Dan: Well there you go.  Dig a little dose your mom have any letters or journals from him.

Harvey: Mom says my Grandma might have some stuff.

{THEY HAVE BEEN WALKING FOR A WHILE AND THEY COME TO MAX NELL’S STUDIO THEY WALK IN MAXS IS THERE GOING OVER SOME WORK HE IS GETTING DONE.}

Max: Hey Harvey I want you to see something! 

Harvey: What’s up?

Max: Now I wanted to get your in put on this book I am thinking of making this but I want you  to help me write it.  So what do you think?

Harvey: Harvey Brooks the kid with two sides.

Max: Now as you see theres no pages to it so you can write it I wanted to call it Harvey Dent but that is copy righted So is Two face so in pinch this what I came up with.

Harvey: Whats is it about?

Max: That’s the fun you get to write it.

Dan: So Are Hr’s just about up hey why don’t we go out for some Coco and talk about your Caricature Max thanks.

Harvey: Hey Max want to come with us?

Max: Na I got some dead lines to make speaking of which Dan the publisher is wondering if the next issue of your monthly is done?

Dan: Ya after I am done with Harvey here I’ll shoot it to you.

Max: Have fun brian storming you two.

{HARVEY, DAN AND K WALK TO THE LOCAL COFFEE SHOP DAN GRABES A MOCA AND HARVEY GETS A MINT HOT CHOCOLATE.  DAN HAD HARVEY WAIT WITH K WHILE HE GOT THE DRINKS.}

Harvey: So should my story be real or fictional?

Dan: That’s up to you but fair warning it’s kinda hard mixing the two I know from personnel experience.

Harvey: How so?

Dan: Wrote a story about a Girl friend she took it the wrong way.  Had a nasty fight at Comic Con.  So as a young writer I suggest you to write fiction unless you have all your facts in order and you get permission before you write.

Harvey: Harvey Brooks.  Hmmm. Do you put people in your story’s that you know?

Dan: Like I said did that once and paid the price but if it’s true it’s kinda of unavoidable even if you make fake names.  People tend to find out who they are.  So are you going with the Two Sides of Harvey Brooks or are you going to go rouge?

Harvey: Na going with the two sides it fits me but it’s going to be fictional.  With some truths.  I think it will be about split personality’s the good side of Harvey and the Bad side.

Dan: What if there were more then two side’s maybe there’d be a side keeping the peace between the two.

Harvey: Ahh but there are only two sides to him.  The thing that is keeping the peace is his strong willed mother.

Dan: I like your thinking this be one good story hey we are at your door and are Hr is up.  I think we covered a lot of ground.  Good luck with the story.

{HARVEY AND DAN SAY THERE GOOD BYES AND HECTOR HEADS IN TO THE APARTMENT DAN WALKS K HOME.}

end episode.

Notes Ok pretty good episode more to come with Salley, Hector, and Little and of coures there parents.  Also I like the devlopment between Dan and Harvey.  It is a little dry in places but it’s still a very good episode once again thanks for reading.

The Band 

Episode 3

Scene we are focusing in on a Bar in Milwaukee the concert goes on with out a hitch the bands do there sets to a half full room of drunken 20 somethings.

Shot the concerts over it’s next mourning hot as hell and the bands are packing up the bands are saying there good by’s to the host band who are the A.P’s Tommy and Brad are laughing around and pointing at Frank who is trying his best not to get another bloody noise.  Tommy and Helen have just started to put away there equipment.   Brad has his arm around Sara and is joking around with Kyle and Dan. Tommy is caring an Amp looks to Bradley with strain in his eye’s.

Tommy Bird.

Hey Punk want to help me with these amps?

Brad Penny.

Well Preppy since I am the leader of the band you can handle the heavy lifting.

Shot Tommy Bird Roles his eyes then sets down the Amp he’s lugging.

Tommy Bird

Ok So I am the lead singer and play lead guitar write the songs and your leader of the band right I buy that.

Brad Penny

Hey you might write the lyrics but I write the music and that’s harder to do then poetry!

Sara Richard’s 

He’s got point there Preppy

Tommy Bird 

Hey only Brad can call me Preppy 

Sara Richard’s

What ever Preppy 

Shot Tommy is getting pissed and little worried that Bradley is going to take over the band looks to Ricky who is coming out the bar Tommy raises his voice.

Tommy Bird 

Hey ROCKER

Shot Ricky stops and looks at Tommy startled.

Ricky Penny 

What up! 

Tommy Bird 

Will you tell your lazy ass Bro to get over here and help us finish packing for the Twin City’s 

Shot Ricky walks over to Brad Slaps him on the back of head and with a stern voice tells him to get to work.

End Scene one Scene two they are piled in to the vans heading to the next big stop Minneapolis Tommy has his head buried in his journal and Brad and Helen are watching Brads Lap top.

Shot Tommy’s Journal Tommy thinks to him self as the van roles on.

The thoughts of Tommy Bird

Well it was very cool and trying four days we have seen a bit of Sara’s past and had a taste of are first concert away from the friendly con finds of the Get up To get Down.  I am having no doubts that we as a band sound great together all though are personalty’s clash Killer thinks he’s the leader of the band even though I write the song’s sing and play lead guitar but he may have a point he’s the Bad boy of the group I’m the cute one and Helen’s the Chick.  I still think Brad gets out of line a bunch but that could play into are hands I don’t know how and I don’t know when 

Ricky Shouts from front of van. to the crew in back.

Ricky Penny

REST ARIA get out for few minutes if any of you have inkling of going I suggest you do now next stops Winona  and then the Twin City’s 

Shot the groups pile out of the vans and Congregate at the rest aria Brad looks to his bro.

Brad Penny

Hey Ricky ware the hell are we any way?

RIcky Penny

Dells just a little more then half way to Winona and then on to the City’s so if you need to go, go.

Shot Sara walks up to the three Helen, Brad and Tommy turn to great her.

Sara Richard’s

( Offers Brad company a Smoke.) Cigaret?

Tommy and Helen 

No thanks 

Brad Penny

Ya I could use one freaked out after watching Seven

Tommy Bird.

That’s what you guys were watching gross man.

Sara Richard’s

I think it’s Bad ass I like Brad Pit.

Brad Penny

Always 

Sara Richard

No not always.   Fight Club and Twelve Monkeys Turned me to the Pit side. I couldn’t stand how girls swooned over him during his early years.

Dan and Kyle walk over to ware Sara, Brad and Tommy are,  Helen has gone to use the rest room Ricky is getting coffee from a machine the McCoy’s are have little argument over finances.  Kyle speaks up to the group about the McCoy’s.

Kyle West 

Dud’s the Trekie’s over there might pose a tuff question!

Sara Richard’s 

What now?  Becky and Ronnie run out condoms?

Shot Tommy and Brad look at each other with a puzzled and gross look on each other face.

Sara Richard’s 

Oh grow up you two like you guys haven’t had the talk yet least I hope for me and Bradley sake!

Kyle West 

Well no that’s not it and it is a little more trouble some then that.  We might have to wire Bob  for money.

Sara Richard’s 

What your Kidding   me right I thought we were staying with Ronnie’s relatives up in the city’s 

Kyle West 

Well apparently Ronnie miss informed his cosines about how many bands would be spending the night 

Sara Richard’s

Dam it well have to get room for the night either beg or barrow I guess?

Ricky Penny has enter the conversation looks to the group then over at the two arguing Bar and Ronnie.

Ricky Penny

Somebody miss there period?

Sara Richard’s

Nope we might not have rooms for when we reach the City’s

Ricky Penny

I’ll wire Bob all though.

Shot Ricky points to both Brad and Tommy Brad and Tommy look at each other.

Ricky Penny

Bob will probably make you two work off the money when we get back.

End Scene two Begin Scene three.

Shot Helen walks over to the group people from the group leave to go to the bath room and They move around and stretch there legs Ricky pulls out his cell phone calls Bob Jones.  After a while the group’s piles into vans Tommy and Helen get in the back of the van Brad joins his brother in the front of the van Ricky gets on to the high way his Cell wrings.   Ricky looks to Brad. Brad answers the phone.

Brad Penny

Hey Dead Head what up.  So how much are we in debt to you?

Shot we are in a very nice looking apartment Dead Head has his land line and we are in split screen on the T.V. Dead Head is carrying a conversation with Brad.

Bob Jones 

Hey Brad heard your in little bit of trouble?

Brad Penny

yea sort of we don’t have a place to stay are you going to help us out?

Bob Jones 

Yup but you don’t need to pay me cause you wont be staying in a hotel Ricky had informed me and I pulled some string’s tell Ricky you guy’s will be staying with J.R.?

Brad Penny.

Who’s He?

Bob Jones.

Old friend of mine Ricky should know ware he lives he’s stayed there be for.  Tell me when you reach Winona and I’ll Tell J.R. you’ll be on your way there he doesn’t just answer to any one.  Well TTFN.

Shot Brad hangs the phone up looks to his older brother.

Brad Penny

So who is J.R. 

Ricky Penny 

J F-ing R. LOL. J F-ing R

Brad Penny

Ya so who is he?

Ricky Penny

I hope Bob didn’t tell him I was coming!

Brad Penny

Ya so who is he?

Ricky Penny 

Well let me put it this way he was the hight of the Red Eyes success and the eventual down fall some might say.

Brad Penny

How so??

Ricky Penny 

Well he’s a big wig in the music biz and the Red Eyes stayed at his place and well we sorta trashed it.

Brad Penny

So who does he represent?

Ricky Penny.

Oh no Real big names manly low level bands but enough of them to live pretty dam well.

Brad Penny

So if we play are cards right we might get represented by some one higher up then Dead Head?

Ricky Penny

Yup By the way who’s the host band when we get to the City’s?  I don’t think I know them that well?  Slasher’s I think is that right?

Brad Penny

Yup Slasher’s there friends Of Ronnie’s and the McCoy’s.  Sara says there a Gun’s and Roses type band.

Ricky Penny 

Makes sense Slashers I wonder what they think of Axel?

Brad Penny

Who?

Ricky Penny

He’s the lead singer of Gun’s and Rose’s people have mixed feeling’s about him.

Dam you need to widen your music listening if you don’t know who Axel Rose is.  Dam!

Shot Brad Puts on his I pod on sits back in his chair and Zones out Ricky keeps his eyes on the road and messes with the radio we go to the back of the van ware Helen and Tommy are talking to each other we join there conversation.

Helen Lions 

Ok favorite Female Band?

Tommy Bird.

Come on you really expect me to answer that question?

Helen Lions 

Come on you have to have a Crush on Female lead.

Tommy Bird 

Not going there you’ll be up in arms 

Helen Lions 

I’ll tell you my Boy band crush.

Tommy Bird.

Common that’s not fair I mean every body likes Male Leads.

Helen Lions 

Oh so it’s like Taboo for boy to like a girl band but it’s ok for girl to like a male band?

Tommy Bird 

Well if you put it that way but still it’s a little strange telling my one love.

Helen Lions 

Ahh one love!  Sweaty common I can take A boy hod crush like you don’t think that I have had crush on other Boy bands I like music just as much as you do.

Tommy Bird

What like (Name of Band.)?

Helen Lions 

No Way more like (Name Of Band.) 

Tommy Bird 

Well if you put like that (Name of Band.) 

Helen Lions 

Ok then!

Tommy Bird 

I knew you would get all weird 

Helen Lions 

Hey to each his own I guess

Ricky Shouts to the Back of the Van as they hit the Winona excite.

Ricky Penny

Winona in A few get ready to get out after Winona it’s No stoping tell the City’s

End Scene three Begin Scene Four The three Bands pile out of van’s there on a levy over looking the Mississippi river to there backs is the small town of Winona. 

Shot the bands congregate to the Right of them a pizza parlor to the left of them a theater and T.V. Station the groups mull around a little and head in to the Parlor for bight  to eat.  Regans and D.C. with Ricky order there pizza and sit down crammed into both’s over looking the Mississippi.  They chat for awhile then Brad speaks up looking across from Sara and to his left is Ricky.

Brad Penny

Ok College town how many times you guys played here?

Ricky Penny 

Never but I have played Lacrosse before and spent the night here I think Sara can say the same.

Sara Richards 

Yup played Lacrosse a bunch a times it’s on the way to the City’s Winona and Lacrosse are both college towns and Lacrosse is bigger more things to attract people but I here Kid Johny Lang played here long time ago 

Brad Penny 

Who’s he 

Ricky Penny 

Famous Blues player very good on the strings.

Tommy Bird  

Hey Next tour we should book Lacrosse any body know any bands in the aria?

Dan Right turns to enter the conversation.

Dan Right.

Hey Lacrosse next road trip. Hmmm are the (name of band.)

Sara Richard’s

No What about (Name of band.)

Dan Right.

Wait a minute let me tweet for a second!

Ricky Penny 

Yup Lacrosse would be fun this way we could cancel out Fargo, Fargo is a bitch to drive 

Shot Dan Right is looking into his cell phone holds up his hand as soon as Ricky gets done talking looks up with a smile on his face.

Dan Right

Ok done and done dud’s we just booked next summers tour.  Also the (Name of same band.) Would like to come to the Metro for a concert looking for some one to host.

Ricky Penny.

Hey Dead Head probably wouldn’t mind I could play who else could we get?

Sara Richards 

Well I am sure the McCoy’s wouldn’t mind doing a show at wait a minute.

Shot Sara leans over into the McCoy’s both and speaks to Ronnie.

Sara Richards

Hey Ronnie you up to Hosting a show at Dead Head’s place.

Ronnie Mickey

Who we hosting?

Sara Richards  

Umm (Name of Same Band Dan talked about.)

Ronnie Mickey

Ya that be cool I know the lead.

Shot Sara looks  to Dan.

Sara Richards 

Ok we got down ware and who all we need is when

Dan looks down to his phone and types reads and looks up to Sara.

Dan Right 

Hows next month in fact the weekend of the 4th work for the McCoy’s?

Sara Richards 

Hey Ronnie you up for a patriotic show?

Ronnie Mickey 

When and ya!

Sara Richards 

Weekend of the 4th 

Ronnie Mickey 

Ya that sounds cool man but dose it have to be patriotic?

Sara Richards 

Well I guess you guys could play God save the Queen.

Brad Penny 

Well then we could have a dysfunctional 4th of july it’s in are name right guys 

Tommy Bird 

I’d kind like to try my hand at Jimmy Hendrix version of the star spangled banner.

Brad Penny 

I’d love to see you pull that one off Preppy!

Helen Lions 

Hey I bet Tommy could pull it off.  Hey Tommy think you could write something Patriotic 

Tommy Bird 

I could give it a spin Hey enough talk Pizza here Dud’s.

End Scene Four the groups eat and converse get up and walk around then down to the white vans in the parking lot and head out of town Ricky drives for a ways they make a quick stop in clear lake for drinks and gas and then they hit the big city lights Ricky’s brother Brad who had been riding shot gun looks up to see the lights.

Ricky Penny 

The Twin City’s home of Prince, Soul Asylum and Joe Mauer!

Brad Penny 

So whats the bar we are playing?

Ricky Penny 

Just your regular hole in the wall type places perfect for bands just starting out like your  self.

Shot they drive for a bite come to a rich part of the Twin City’s they come to pretty good sized house its J.R.’s house the bands park out side Ricky phones J.R. and then J.R. comes out to great them.

J.R.

Welcome Punks and Rockers and of cores you Ricky Yea Dead head told me you were coming any funny stuff and you might as well get your gear and head home!

Ricky Penny.

Don’t worry J.R. no funny stuff me and Sara learned are lesson’s.

J.R.

Good to know you learned your lesson Rocker and lets hope this time it’s different.

End Episode.

Notes: Ok puting the notes infront of this because what you have been reading in school days up untill this part had been for the most part in one form or another had actually happened to me granted I can’t remember things down to a T and there is alot of dramatic licensing so there a lot of fiction mixed in with the truth, partly to punch things up.  But this part of the story the battel over School Uniforms is completly fictionel.  Hope you have enjoyed and hope you enjoy this part of the story.

School days 11

By Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene Interior Journalism class a class of seven sit.

{A CLASS OF SEVEN KIDS SIT A DISCUS WITH THERE TEACHER WHAT THEY WANT TO DO FOR THIS YEARS SCHOOL PAPER.}

Josh Mcdaniels: So I was thinking we could have the paper be like a regular paper.

Jen Brook: Yup I think that would be cool can we have the same kind of paper too?

Mrs. Carver: Well I don’t know about that but if we can do it like a regular paper but on are budget.

Carl Right: So could we sell add space?

Mrs. Carver: That may be a little risky but I’ll talk to the principal and see what we can swing.  Ok class I am going to give you some class time to see what stories and editorials you can work on.

{THREE FRIENDS SIT AND DISCUS THERE PROJECTS BRIAN STORMING.}

Jen Brook: Yup a three part series with culmination at the end that would be cool?

Carl Right: What’s a hot button topic we could do are stories on?

Josh Mcdaiels: I heard there discussing school Unies how about story about that.

Jen Brook: Yay we could do a column about the pro unie crowed and then an Anti column about it then are conclusion.

Carl Right: (Noticing Jen and Josh looking longly into there eye’s) Well to me that sounds like a two person editorial so I’ll let you two work on that you to love birds. 

Josh: So what you going to work on?

Carl Right: A hard hitting editorial on school food.

Jen Brook: Great (Jen and Josh are just looking in each other eyes.)

Josh: Yeah school food.

{CARL WAVES A PEACE OF PAPER IN BETWEEN THE TWO LOVE BIRDS NOT EVEN A FLINCH.}

Carl Right: Cut the tension in here with a knife.

Scene Interior Lunch room 

{THE USUAL’S SIT AT TABLE TERRY AND BRISTEL SIT STARING AT THERE PLATES NOT SAYING ANYTHING TO EACH OTHER.  THERE TWO GIRLS SITTING TO THE SIDE OF THEM.  THEY TALK.  BRISTEL AND TERRY SAY NOTHING.

Kiky Colber: You know if we get school unies I am dropping out enrolling in another school!

{JEN BROOK IS THE GIRL ACROSS FROM KIKY.}

Jen Brook: That’s interesting Kiky cause I am doing an editorial for the paper on this subject.  Can I gets some of your thoughts on recored of course oh and Terry and Bristel what do you guys think?  Oh and this column the part I am writing is that I am oppose the school uniforms Josh is doing a study on people who are pro Uniforms.  So I’ll refer you to him if you are.

Kiky Colber: Well there defiantly opposed right!

Bristel: I do see why we may need them.

Terry: Bristel really?  Wont you feel pressured to be an out cast cause of your glass’s?

Bristel: Well not every one can afford the latest trend and I got to stand with my boy friend.

Kiky: What is Biff Trailer trash!

Bristel: NO and you and your fitch crowed can go to HELL Kiky!

Jen: This is going to be one dam good story!

Bristel: You can put that on recored JEN!

Jen: And another one bight’s the dust.

{BRISTEL GETS UP WALKS AWAY DUMPS HER LUNCH AND HEADS TO THE COUNCILORS OFFICE.}

Scene Choir room it’s just the start kids are filling in.

{DIRK AND JIM SITT TALKING UPPER CLASE MAN JOSH MCDANIELS HEADS OVER TO THEM..}

Josh: Hey guys?

Jim: What up Josh?

Josh: Jim, Hitch Hiker,

{DIRK FLINCHES A LITTLE.}

Josh: I’ve been walking around the class room getting opinions on the possibility of school uniforms.  What do you guys think on the recored?

Scene interior councilors office waiting room.

{BRISTEL SIT’S WAITING FOR HER TURN SHE IS CALLED IN.  SHE TAKES A SEAT ON THE COUCH.}

Kitty Hawkins: Bristel how can I help you?

Bristel: I am worried!

Kitty: How so Bristel.

Bristel: This whole world is just way to, to.

Scene Interior Choir Room.

Dirk: Commercialized We need to focus on who the person is and not who there.

Scene Interior councilors office.

Bristel:  Who there waring!  That goes for

Scene Interior Choir room

Dirk: Calvin Kline,

Scene Interior Councilors office.

Bristel: Mr. Lee, Mr. Fitch!

Scene Interior Choir room

Dirk: It just pisses me off that, that’s what people see when they look at me.

Josh: Wow this good stuff Hitch Hiker!

Dirk: And please don’t call me that.

Scene Interior councilors office

Bristel:  And that’s another thing I am not totally thrilled with unies I have glass so are people just going to notice these or are they going to see me for the pretty bubbly person I am?

Kitty: Look Bristel cloths may define what you look like.  But your friends are going to like you for who you are and not what your waring.  Also if your going to have to worry about what you look like around your friends maybe there not your friends.   Here I give you a challenge.  I want you to go threw your wardrobe and pick out a out fit that is loud and that is definitely a fashion Fo Paw.  And I hope to see you in it tomorrow.  And just see and observe how your friends look at you make mental notes and then get back to me.

Scene Interior Bristels dressing room the next mourning.

{BRISTLE IS LOOKING THREW HER CLOTHS LOOK FOR THE LOUDEST MOST GEEKISH MOST UN HIPP THING SHE COULD WARE.  FINDS THE RIGHT OUTFIT THAT FITS HER LIKE A GLOVE WALKS OUT MOM AND DAD LOOK LIKE WHATS UP WITH THERE DAUGHTER.}

Mrs. Becker: Deer is there some thing up?

Bristel: Nope!

Mr. Becker: Deer I got to stop down town I can take you to school if you want?

Bristel: You know I think I’ll take the bus But thanks dad

{BRISTEL HEADS OUT THE DOOR.}

end episode.

The Band episode 2

the Band on Tour 

Copy write 2010

Chrisdavis   F. Neal

Winona MN 1313 Crocus Cr 55987

Scene one Tommy Bird , Helen Lions and Brad Penny are in the back of the Van piled high with stuff Ricky Penny is driving they are headed north from the inner city first stop is a town in Milwaukee and it’s up to St.Paul and then to Fargo it’s not that long of a trip that’s why there parents agreed to it.  The Regan’s Van is right behind them and following them is the McCoy’s Van it is bring up the rear 

Shot Tommy is Keeping a journal of the Trip he is writing in it to pass the time.

as the Van and the Band headed to there destination we enter Tommy’s mind as he writes in his journal.

The thoughts of Tommy Bird

Well It took my brother and I all school year to convince my parents to let me go on the summer trip with the Regan’s but after Ricky said he’d be the Driver that was the deal closer 

Shot as Tommy talks the camera fades in and out and focus’s on the various people Tommy is writing about.

The Thoughts of Tommy Bird 

Freshmen year of high school was hell the usual me getting Teased Brad seemingly getting in to any fight he could and my friends turning there noises at my new girl friend Helen manly my girl friends turn there heads frankly all my male friends thought that it was cool. I think it was because the other chicks were free now. Bob Jones and Brad had there first tiff Brad has real problem with authority you probably wondering what it was about well.  It was new state wide enforcement of a smoking ban and your probably wondering what a 16 year old is doing with cigarets in the first place heres ware Sara enters the picture she’s 18 and has Brad in her hand.  She buys him every thing well she is well off and her parents don’t give a shit Brad keeps on nagging her to join the public school system she refuse’s I think there is some uptown girl in her that won’t go away and that might come back to bite them as of now we are on tour and there cool. 

Shot Ricky shouts to them from the driver seats.

Ricky Penny

Ok Up and atom boys and girls it’s are first stop the Bar is wanting us to unload out back and any hint of alcohol on your breaths and we wont be back here ever again that means you Bradley.

Shot Brad and Helen and Tommy get out of the back of the parked van and start unloading stuff.

Brad Penny

Hey Brow who’s the host of the show any way.

Ricky Penny

Oh the Red Eyes and Regan’s know the band well umm A.P’s 

Brad Penny

Dam not more initials what they stand for!

Ricky Penny

Alternative Preps 

Shot Brad looks over to Tommy and pats him on the back 

Brad Penny

Right up your ally then Preppy

Shot the other two vans have pulled up and have been unloading there stuff Sara walks up to Brad and Tommy she has a liter and is digging out a pack of cigarets out of her pocket offers one to both Brad and Tommy.

Sara Richard’s

Cigarette!

Tommy Bird

No thanks those things will kill you 

Brad Penny

and your point Only the good die young you should know that you listen to that crap!

Tommy Bird

Hey Billy Joel is not crap I’d like to sell as many albums as he has.

Sara Richard’s

It’s still crap!

Brad Penny 

Thank you hunny I knew there was a reason I love you.

Shot two guys walk out of the back the bar and walk past the DC van and then over to ware the DC are unloading.  Sara notices the two right a way and runs over to hug them

Tommy and Brad look at each other The guys she hug’s ooze of prep border line Jockish qualities.  Sara walks hand in hand with them over to Brad and Tommy.

Tommy Bird

Let me Think you guys are members of A.P. 

Sara Richard’s 

Ok this is Bud we just call him Bud he is really nice guy and to my right Frank Right 

Brad Penny

Hi I’m Brad and this Tommy Helens over there getting ready.

Tommy walks away and over to the Regans Van ware Kyle West and Dan Right are moving stuff in and out 

Tommy Bird

Hey what gives with those three

Kyle West and Dan Right look at each other and then at Tommy.

Kyle West

Sara use to be apart of A.P. and in love with Frank Right

Tommy Bird 

Oh and Dan are you related to Frank.

Dan Right

Unfortunately yes he is my cousin he sorta dumped Sara senior year of school to go out with one of the Cheerleaders who was going to go to the same college in Milwaukee Frank gave Sara the cold shoulder and kicked here out of the band after that long story short she goes into a big black period and well I felt sorry for her and I was angry at my cousin so we formed this band that way she could cope with her inner demons

Tommy Bird 

So why are they cool now?

Dan Right

I think Sara is still living in the past when ever they are around she pales around with them. Even after all the shit Frank pulled 

End Scene one

Begin Scene Two We fade out of Scene one and in to Scene Two We are in the Bar Ricky is over at the bar with Shirley temple in hand Helen, Tommy and Brad are setting up too practice while Sara, Frank and Bud are remising about the past Brad keeps glancing over to them like he just lost some thing.

Shot Tommy walks over to Brad as Brad hangs his head Tommy puts his hand on his shoulder to comfort him.

Tommy Bird

Old flames die hard I must say.

Shot Brad looks to Tommy and Smirks.

Brad Penny 

Is that are next hit single?

Shot Helen looks up to the two of them and laughs.

Helen Lions 

Hey Killer you jealous?

Brad Penny

Me Hell no don’t even know the meaning of the word!

Tommy Bird

That’s the Brad I know and love tuff as nails besides Frank’s old news he had his chance and now she’s with you!

Brad Penny

Still there’s hole part of her life that I don’t know about 

Helen Lions

There secrets every lover has that they don’t necessarily feel that good telling the other about right Tommy Knocker 

Tommy Bird 

she got a point there still a lot that me a Helen haven’t told each other yet that will come out in due time 

Helen Lions

Well we are up first for practice will you two help me get the drums set up 

Brad and Tommy

Sure thing Helen!

End Scene Two as Brad and Tommy help Helen get set they tune there equipment and do there sets with out a hitch the other three bands follow as Tommy sticks his head into his Diary and writes.

Shot Tommy writes as scenes fade in and out as he writes

The thoughts of Tommy Bird,

Well Brad and Sara have come to across roads and Dan is trying his best to keep them to gather he doesn’t want Sara to be hurt again.  Brad says he’s not Jealous but I know better hell If I had to see Helen pale around with a former lover I know I’d be jealous and  then theres Dan Right I’d like to know more about his relationship to Sara it seems he has some feelings for her is there such a thing as a Squared relationship.  Helen want’s to go deeper with are relationship but I don’t know if I am ready to get into those apples.

Shot Helen, Tommy and Ricky sit at the bar Sara and the A.P’s are over in the conner by the stage and Brad is over by the rest of the Regans ware there equipment is and they are have a good time tuning instruments and talking music.  We join them in there banter.

Kyle West 

Ok favorite Punk song?

Shot Kyle posses the question to the other two they look at him and think 

Brad Penny

(name of Punk song and name of punk band)

Dan Right 

No way dud it’s got to be (name of song and band.) It has every thing just like a punch in the mouth 

Brad Penny

Well I am kinda new in the punk seen hell I am sixteen half this stuff my parents don’t want me listing to.

Dan Right

Ok what ever man common your bother is Ricky the Rocker Penny he had to have let you listen into some cuts.

Brad Penny

ya but he was into hard core Grunge and since his band was main stream he listen to alternative as well 

Shot off in the distance there’s a shout from Sara.

Sara Richard’s

NO NO YOU ASS!!

Shot all heads turn up to Sara who is Head strong and runs out the bar Brad and the Regans follow after her Tommy and Helen follow suite and Ricky goes up to the stage.

Shot out side the bar the six stand around Sara is pacing the rest are around here trying to to get a grips on what just happened.

Dan Right 

Ok what did Frank do this time?

Sara Richard’s

Ok I don’t See the jerk for a year and all of sudden last winter he calls me with the Idea of touring again.  He says he’s changed things will be different.  That bitch. (Fumbles around in her pocket for cigaret.) Dam any of you have a cig.

Dan Right.

(Digs in his pocket pulls out a cigaret pack hands one to Sara.) Here I got three left.

Brad Penny

What did he say I can kick his ass if you want.

Kyle West

Ya that be great the night before a concert lose two bands do to stupidity!

Brad Penny

F this what did he say.

Sara Richard’s 

He wanted to get back to gather better yet he wanted to Park some ware 

Brad Penny 

That f-er he’s dead that’s it he is dead

Shot Brad turns to go into the bar ready beat the shit out of Frank but Kyle and Dan hold  him back.

Dan Right 

Think Just think we have over a thousand miles to go and I don’t want to end it here so cool man just keep cool!

Brad Penny

I don’t give a shmit he is dead I tell you he is dead.

Shot Now Tommy and Helen beckon Brad not to do what he’s about to do but Brad breaks the hold all six of them pile threw the door they look.  There two people looking over Frank who has a bloody nose and is on the floor Ricky is shacking his fist and grabbing his leather jacket walks past Brad and the six of them speaks to Brad. And the crew.

Ricky Penny

We have more then a thousand miles to go so grab your gear we are skipping out either back to metro or on with tour I don’t know about you guys but I am done with this trash.

Shot the Crew follow Ricky out the door and Frank is cursing in the bar they are out side the bar Ricky Penny Jester’s to Dan for Cigaret and Dan hands him one. Brad looks at him curiously and posses a question.

Brad Penny

Thought you quite?

Ricky Penny 

I did but my nerves are shot I just killed the tour for us that’s money out the window.  Bob is going to be pissed.

Shot Sara has lost her nerves to and shacking runs into the bar the group mulls around  

For awhile Sara returns and is still a little shot but is able to speak she focus’s on Ricky.

Sara Richard’s

Ok we have tonight to practice right?

Shot The group looks at her and agrees she continues.

Sara Richard’s 

Ok Ricky wants to go solo right 

Ricky Penny

Well ya that’s my hope any way 

Sara Richard

This is your shot Rocker!

Brad Penny

What do you Mean?

Sara Richard 

Well the A.P’s are out a lead and Ricky wants to Lead Right?

Ricky Penny

Hey that’s not bad I mean the A.P’S know all of the Red Eye’s song’s and vis versa!

Sara Richard

Ricky we just launched your carrier and saved the Show.

End Scene two We fade out of the show end episode

Ok this is the seconde episode and well it’s a pretty good but it’s not exactly accurate to

what a band dose on tour but it’s still a pretty damn good story if I don’t say so my self.

Once agian thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed.

AM/FM 22nd episode 

By Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene Interior Taco Bell mall park 

{TWO VERY TIRED BOYS SIT VERY TIRED AND LOOKING FOOLISH.  TWO OTHER BOYS ARE SORT OF CONSOLING THEM.} 

Dan: So you guys got bust in the Gay 90’S? Jill must have been thrilled about that.

Matt: How’s that Karma treating you now Jack?  So Jack what you blow on the breathalyzer?

Jack; Hardly any thing!  I didn’t know the drink had Alcohol in it I asked for a Diet Coke with grenadine and got Jack and Coke.  I thought it tasted funny.

Dan: How did Tammy handle it.

Little: Better then the most of us but still Jeezu Jack!  If you think there is Alcohol involved put the drink down.

Jack: What it had a cherrie and every thing.

Little: And the best part is the night we spent in jail and the talk we got from Jacks dad on the ride home from jail.

Matt: So this means your out of school?

Jack: My dad is going to talk to the judge and just maybe we wont be expelled from school at the most will do community service and may be pay a fine cause it was a accident.

{SUDDENLY THE PHONE RINGS IT’S JACKS DAD.}

Jack: Yes Sir I know Sir, Wont happen again, I’ll tell Little and Tammy.  Ok So we need to be at the court house on Wednesday at 9:00am and then we have meetings with the school later on that day.

Little: Well I’ve learned my lesson!  And if it comes down to the brunt of it I’ll take the fall cause it was my Idea to begin with.

Dan: Hey guys what time is it?

Little: 4:30pm Why?

Dan: Got to get going cause I got meet my kid he’s getting done with Key kids then I have an Hour with him after that.  Oh and I got to walk K good luck with the court and school guys.

Scene Exterior out side school Dan is waiting for his Harvey.

{SCENE DAN WAITS OUT SIDE FOR HARVEY A FEW MINUTES PASS DAN GETS KINDA OF ANTSY WALKS INTO THE SCHOOL FINDS A TEACHER ASK’S HER WHERE THE KEY KIDS MEET SHE TELLS HIM DAN WALKS DOWN TO THE CLASS ROOM IT’S EMPTY.  WALKS IN SEES A TEACHER WALKS UP TO HIM.}

Dan: Hey wares Harvey Grover I was supposed to meet him here?

John Bower: Oh I sent him to the principle’s office he’s there waiting for his mother.

Dan: What did he do?

John Bower: Punched a kid in the eye.  He says the kid made fun of him but still that’s no call for that.

Dan: Wares the principles office?

John: At the end of the hall to your right.

Dan: Thanks.

{DAN WALKS FOR A WAYS COMES TO THE OFFICE SEES THAT HARVEY’S MOM IS THERE WITH HARVEY DAN WALKS IN.}

Dan: Hi guys heard what happened!

Jackie: Well this Kid is grounded!

Dan: But I would still like to meet with him.

Harvey: Why the hell am I always in the wrong.  Do know what it’s like to have my name   It Sucks!

Dan: I think Harvey is a great name!

Harvey: Really you know what it’s like to be called two faced and not to mention the last name Grover!

Dan: Do you know what Harvey was before he was Two Face.  He was one Gothams finest hey you want to come down to my studio here I got to put in phone call.  Jackie do you mind if I take him for are hr?

Jackie: But after that no fun time for the rest week got that kiddo.

Harvey: God dam this Sucks!

Scene Exterior city streets of Minneapolis.

{DAN IS WALKING WITH HARVEY DAN TAKES OUT HIS PHONE CALL’S MAX.}

Dan: Hey Max I was wondering what you up to?  You want to meet me at the studio I have my partners kid with me.  Sure will be there in a few.  Thanks Max.  Here Harvey will get a cab.

{THEY HAIL A CAB DAN AND HARVEY ARE RIDING DOWN TO THE STUDIO.  HARVEY STAIRS OUT THE WINDOW.}

Dan: So what happened?

Harvey: Some times I wish I’d been named something different.

Dan: Who were you named for?

Harvey: I’ve been told my Great Grand father he fought in WW2

Dan: Harvey is a strong name and so is Grover.  You know there was a president named Grover of course that was his first name.  Guess what his last name was it was Cleveland.

Harvey: He must of got some flack from that!

Dan: You know your parents weren’t trying to be mean when they named you.

Harvey: I know but it still sucks.

Dan: Ever do any digging up on your great grand father?

Harvey: Why?

Dan: Well knowing what he did in his life may make you take more pride in your name.

Cabbie: Hey Buddy we are here that will be $10.00

Dan: Here you go thanks for the ride and here this is for you.

Cabbie: Thanks man have nice day.

{THEY EXITE THE CAB MAX IS WAITING FOR THEM THEY WALK UP THE STAIRS TO THE STUDIO.}

Max: So this is Harvey Hi there I am Max

Harvey: Hey Max Dan tells me your an Artist?

Max: Of sorts I could teach you if you’d like.  Have you ever dabbled?

Harvey: Off and on but I suck I am more of a writer.

Max: Just keep working on it.  It’s when you put it down that’s when you start to loose it.

Scene we go from that to car driving from the College of Jack and Little.

{JACK SITTS IN THE PASSENGER SIDE OF THE CAR HIS DAD IS DRIVING THE CAR.}

Dave Daniel’s: So what did we learn from this Jack?

Jack: One don’t go to clubs until 21

Dave: And what else?

Jack: Don’t drink until 21.

Dave: Good and I don’t want to have to come back for strike two let alone strike three.  Oh by the way the judge wasn’t kidding when he talked about community service and not to mention the marks on your license.  Oh and since you wont be driving for a while I’ll take you to work but your going to have to get to school on your own I work during the week day.  And Jack I am very dissapointed in you and you’ll have to earn my respect back.   Got it buddy!

Jack: ya

Dave: What was that are we Clear on this!

Jack: Crystal SIR.

Dave: Good.

end episode 

Notes I am putting the notes a head of this one to one warn you about the length and two to tell you a little bit before you get going.  This is a story that I had been working on a long time ago it’s diffrent in format then the other ones I’ve worked on any who I hope it’s enjoyable to read and sorry in advance about the length.

The Band

By

Chrisdavis F.  Neal 

The band a Chris Neal production 2010

Chris Neal    

Winona Mn 1313  Crocus Cr 

55987

Scene one

Scene Description 

We are at the basement of the Bird family.  Tony is getting ready to leave for band practice.  He is putting his two guitars in a bag.  Tommy Tony’s younger brother is practicing his guitar and is working out the kinks in the mission impossible theme song

and is excited that he finally got it down walks in to the basement hall way and into to Tony’s room as Tony is getting ready to go to practice.

Tony Bird 

What up Bro 

Tommy Bird 

Hey Tony look what I can do 

Shot 

Tommy play’s the song for Tony.  Tony looks at Tommy with a smirk and laugh’s 

Tony Bird 

Well I’ll Be dammed after a month of practice you finally got Take a Look Around 

Shot 

Tommy blushes looks up to his bro

Tommy Bird 

Hey Tony going to the bar?

Tony Bird 

Yup our send-off show is tomorrow. (Pause) 

Shot 

They look at each other Tony Has a Bright Idea.

Tony Bird 

Hey Tommy you still write songs.

Tommy Bird 

Ya but they all kinda suck 

Tony Bird 

Hey don’t think like that you have potential.  Anyway you know Ricky my lead bass player well his little bro is putting together a band he has a drummer.  But they need a lead, so you want to meet him? Hell, you might gel together like me, B.D. and Ricky did.

Tommy Bird 

Ya that be great!

Tony Bird 

Hey come with me to practice Ricky will be there of course and maybe his Bro

Shot 

Tony and Tommy walk up stairs and say goodbye to their Mom and Dad as they leave to practice 

end Scene one 

Scene two 

We see a car pulling up to a bar. There are two people in the car.  They are Tommy and Tony Bird and the car is pulling up to the bar which is called the “Get up to Get down”. two people standing at the entrance of the bar it’s Ricky the Rocker Penny and his Brother Brad. 

Shot 

Tony leans out of his car window shouts out to his band mate Ricky.

Tony Bird 

Hey Rocker you ready to Get up to Get down?! Woooo!!

Shot 

Tony gets out the car and walks over to Brad tuffuls the kids hair.

Tony Bird 

Is this the famous Brad Killer Penny that you talk so much about 

Brad Penny

Ya hey is that your Bro T-Bird?

Tony Bird 

Yup that is none other then Tommy Knocker Bird 

Brad Penny 

Ricky tells me that Tommy plays the six string like you Tony 

Tony Bird

I’d say it runs in the family but neither my mother or father play to my knowledge

Ricky Penny

Hey Doonesbury say’s he’ll be a little late cause of wedding stuff.  But he shouldn’t be to long so let’s get in there.

End scene Two

Scene three Helen Lions is sitting at the drums practicing a song as Tommy and company come in to the bar Bob the Dead head is at the bar getting ready for tonight.

Shot the crew pause and look over each other Tommy is surprised to see Helen who he know’s from A.P government.

Tommy Bird

So Helen you know Brad? 

Helen Lions 

Yup We are in band to gather.

Shot Brad looks stunned to see that Tommy and Helen know each other.

Brad Penny

You to know each other 

Helen Lions 

Yup we are in A.P Government together Brad I am surprised you to don’t know each other.

Tommy Bird 

Well I’ve seen Brad around school but are social lives are different.

Shot Brad size up Tommy and laughs.

Brad Penny 

That’s for sure Preppy

Bob the Dead head is walking out of a fridge turns around to see the five people in his bar notice Tommy and Brad 

Bob Jones 

Well I get any more under age kids in this place and they’ll put me on notice 

Shot Tony and crew notice Bob and turn to great him.

Tony Bird 

Hey Dead Head how are you 

Bob Jones

Oh just fine hey college bound student are you going to work here after high school if you aren’t I need your two week notice.

Tony Bird

No problem Dead head hey if I get your two week notice can I still work as a talent scout for you.

Bob Jones 

Yup you know what I pay not much.

Tony Bird 

I’ll get by I just need something to pay the interest off my loans. 

Shot Helen has now joined the group at the bar and is looking at Tommy song book

Helen Lions 

Hey Brad check out some of these this one here isn’t bad.

Brad Penny

(Name of Song) Not bad show’s some promise 

Helen Lions 

Brads on the Jazz band second Base player 

Brad Penny 

Hey I am freshmen I’ll be lead no question the guy we have now isn’t that good.

Helen Lions 

Calm down there Killer any way Killer here could write the music and you can put out the lyrics and of course I’ll supply the beat.

Tony Bird

Hey Dead Head If they form a band do you think they could practice here

Bob Jones 

Yup one thing is I get to produce there first recored.

Tommy Bird 

Hey I could live with that what do you say Killer.

Brad Penny 

Ya Hey Dead Head can you teach me how to mix mean Cock tail?

Bob Jones

Just wait tell your old enough then hell yeah.

Helen Lions 

Hey you think we should play a round to see how we jell.

Tommy Bird

Hey I don’t have my Six string here.

Tony Bird 

Hey Tommy use mine go have fun you three. 

Shot Helen, Tommy and Brad leave the bar head to play a song Tommy has his brothers    

Six string guitar, and Brad has Ricky base Helen is on B.D.’s Sticks.

Helen lions 

Ok Bitch on Three

Shot Tommy and Brad stair at each other then at Helen, Helen starts counting out the beat Brad raises his hand.

Brad Penny

Wait a minute Bitch Meredith Brooks bitch no no No chick flicks 

Hey Tommy you down with Green Day 

Tommy

Basket case on three Helen  count it out 

Helen Lions

Boys just don’t get complicated girl songs oh hell on three. One Two Three

Shot as the band plays Tony and Ricky look on Dead Head  continues his prep work 

Tony and Ricky ponder there future for bit.

Ricky Penny 

So you think there good?

Tony Bird 

Hard to say they have talent  and could go far.

Ricky Penny 

Isn’t that what you said about us?

Tony Bird 

Ya but I didn’t know at the time that B.D. was going to get married right out of High School and that I was going break up with Christie and then take her advice and go to college. But My question to you is what are you going to do?

Ricky Penny 

Me oh don’t worry about me I think I might go solo

Tony Bird 

Really?

Ricky Penny 

Yup Dead Head says there might be a talent scout here to night 

Tony Bird 

Ya me so?

Ricky Penny 

No a really agent dummy any way speaking of which can I play the six string tonight at least on some of the songs if there is scout here I’d like to strut my stuff.

Tony Bird  

Sure thing 

Shot a couple walk in it’s Carrie and B.D. they have there arms around each other  Ricky and Tony look at them and then roll there eye’s 

Ricky Penny

Get a room!

Tony Bird 

About time Doonesbury!

B.D.

Hey we had wedding stuff! 

Shot B.D. notices the music and the girl playing his sticks the band has move on to a different song when I come around.

B.D.

Hey who’s the chick playing my sticks?

Tony Bird

B.D. I’d like meet on the Drums Helen Hot Lions on Base Brad Killer Penny and Tommy Knocker Bird on lead.

B.D. 

You and you’er nick names any way whats the bands name?

Shot Tony and Ricky look at each other then Tony looks up at Tommy 

Tony Bird 

Hey Bro 

Shot

Tommy and company continue to play Tony rolls his eye’s and shouts.

Tony Bird 

Hey PREPPY 

Shot Tommy stops playing but Brad and Helen continue

Tommy Bird 

WHAT??

Tony Bird 

Whats your name

Shot Tommy cant here his bro looks to Brad a nails him on the shoulder Brad looks in discussed

Brad Penny

Hey what the? 

Tommy Bird 

Hey Punk my Bro is trying to say some thing!

Tony Bird 

What’s your guys name going to be?

Shot Helen has now stopped playing they look at each other.

Tommy Bird 

I don’t know?

Brad Penny 

Good question 

Helen Lions 

I have an Idea?

Shot there’s a pause they look at Helen.

Helen Lions 

Well I have an Idea any way and I hate to admit but I am Nerd

Shot Brad and Tommy look at each other in agreement 

Tommy and Brad

Ya sorta sorry

Helen Lions

No no I admit completely but to get the point.  Brad’s a Punk are we all in agreement on that

Brad Penny

Well I am sort of punk

Helen Lions 

And Tommy’s a Prep as Brad like’s pointing out.

So what about PNP.

Ricky Penny

Prep Nerd and Punk sound like a law firm.

Brad Penny 

Ya a dysfunctional law firm!

Tommy Bird

Ya but that’s us to a T

Brad Penny

I don’t know that I like the Idea of initials. I know I remember in Psych class they had a word for what we represent I think it was called a clique

Tommy Bird 

I like it how about D.C. then

Helen Lions 

What’s the D for?

Tommy Bird 

Dysfunctional Clique

Brad Penny 

I don’t know I don’t think we need initials

Tommy Bird 

Well I think that Clique by it’s self is to generic

Helen Lions

I like it lets go with it 

Brad Penny

Well I think that two out three agree I take it that that’s are name then. D.C sounds like a comic book company!

Tony

Well now that’s settled it’s time for the Red Eye’s to take the stage!

Ricky Penny

In the words of the immortal Al Bundy Lets Rock.

Shot Tony Ricky and B.D. take there place on the stage.

Ricky Penny

O.K are you ready to Rock out there or what! 

B.D. 

Hell ya!

Tony Bird 

B.D.,  Ricky don’t want to work he just wants to bang his girl all day long

B.D. 

Hey dick there kids out there besides it’s bang on the drum all day long 

Tony Bird.

Ah yes but Ricky don’t play the drums but he dose like playing around.

Shot Ricky is tuning his base and is getting frustrated and B.D and Tony are getting tick that Ricky is getting peeved at his base.

Ricky Penny

Dam it Brad what did you do to my base 

Brad Penny 

Hey don’t look at me if you have to look at electric tuner to do up your base

Ricky Penny 

There how dose that sound?

Shot Ricky plays some on the base.

B.D.

Sounds off!

Ricky Penny

Dam it Brad If I snap a string it’s coming out of your ass.

Shot Ricky plays some more 

Ricky Penny

How’s that?

B.D. and Tony 

OFF!

B.D. 

Hey what should we start with for the show we haven’t really talked about it. I mean we know what songs were doing but what order?

Tony Bird 

How about are hit ballad I am sorry honey but my Dick bends 

B.D.

Hey ass hole my wife’s out there!

Ricky Penny 

Hey Tony think he’s saying some thing about him self?

B.D.

Hey dick what’s that supposed to mean!

Carrie Miller

It mean’s your Dick Bends 

Tony Bird 

Uh we would like to thank the future Mrs’s B.D. for making that joke work and for giving us a snap shot of B.D.’s love making.

B.D.

God dam it what are we going to begin with and thank god this is are send off show!

Shot the Red eye’s argue over what they want to start with while Carrie has turned her attention to Bob the dead Head.

Carrie Miller 

So Dead Head did you get my two week notice and the invitation to the big day?

Bob Jones

Yes and yes also you do not have to come in those last two weeks cause I know how you and B.D. will be busy with wedding stuff and yes I am defiantly coming

Carrie Miller

Hey Bob I heard threw the grape vine you turning this place into a juice bar

Bob Jones 

Yup the city’s offering a lot money for me to convert cause they need less bars and more places for kids to come. Although since this place dose sell dam good food if I don’t say so my self I might turn it into a sports bar that just happen’s to have live music so that teens can still come. And collage  students can still get a drink but will see.

As Carrie and Bob converse we close scene two.

Scene three We have elapsed time and bands have come and done there turn with practices it is the night time and the concert begin’s a number of bands take the stage there a number of kids dancing slam dancing to be exact we come to a conner of room where Brad Killer Penny is talking with a band and he is inthralled with manly the lead singer who is female a red head named Sara Richard’s.

Shot Brad is talking to Sara Richards.

Brad Penny

So how come I haven’t herd of you guys cause me and my bro know all the bands at Metro high

Sara Richard

It’s because we don’t go to Metro high we are in the Catholic system

Shot Brad Size up the band notice’s the Goth look of them the black clothes and Gothic garb the kind stuff you’d find at Hot topic or some other dark seeded rock store.

Brad Penny

So what are you Catholic Rockers?

Kyle West 

Hell No!

Sara Richard

We are Goth all the way.

Brad Penny

So this is really Rebelling for you?

Kyle West

You could say that. 

Brad Penny

Whats your name?

Sara Richard

The Regan’s 

Brad Penny

After the President I assume

Kyle West

Hell no that’s the line we give are parents 

Brad Penny

Then what?

Sara Richard 

It’s the name of the little girl in Exorcist you know the movie!

Brad Penny

I love it man

Sara Richard 

So why are you here just catching some tunes or what?

Brad Penny.

Yeah Plus my brother is head liner 

Kyle West

Who’s your brother?

Brad Penny

Ricky the Rocker Penny me I’m Brad Killer Penny.

Kyle West

Dam your a Penny it’s crazy that a rich kid like your self is going to public!

Brad Penny

What can I say my parents are Liberals and believe in the public system.

Sara Richard

Hey Brad it’s are time to go on hope to see you at the after party you Killer you.

Shot Sara and the Regan’s are on stage getting ready to play Sara grabs the mic looks at Brad Penny who’s in the pan looking up at Sara

Sara Richard

Hey Rockers weren’t the Bungell’s a great act we are the Regan’s and we are from right here in the Metro we would like to thank the Red Eyes and are resident Dead Head Bob Jones for putting on this show.  We are going to start you off with one of are slower song’s and work you up to are faster pace songs and yes this ones for you Killer you know who you are (Name of Song.) On three ready.

Shot Time has past we go to another conner of the bar were B.D.,Carrie, Helen and Tommy are sitting on a love seat and whispering sweet nothing’s in each other’s ear Tony who has been walking threw the crowed and mingling notice the four and is particularly grossed out by his younger brother and his new found love.

Tony Bird

Ok who ever slip my Bro the Alcohol pleas stand up

B.D.

Hey T-Bird there in love.

Tony Bird 

Oh Great my brother in love what am I going to do when he comes home with me with a hickey on his neck?  Won’t that be great breakfast table story.  By the way mom dad I took Tommy to a party were there lots of kids and beer and guess what he made out with another chick.

Carrie Miller

Relax Tony I am sure he’s gotten the birds and bees talk he’s of age any how.

Tony Bird

Ya your right besides my parents know that he’s already seen all my back issues of Play Boy.

Helen Lions 

WHAT!!

Carrie Miller 

Relax Helen every boy in the Metro have seen Tony’s back issues of play boy.

B.D.

She’s right you know hell I think it’s the one thing he’s proud of I mean the white staines    

on the pages prove that!

Tommy Bird

You’ve seen them Too?

Shot Sara Richard’s and Brad Penny enter the seen with there arm’s wrapped around each other Carrie roles her eyes.

Carrie Miller

Love is in the Air I take it Or has Dead Head gone crazy and started handing out Alcohol  to any body with a stamp on there hand

Brad Penny

Hey guys this is Sara Richard she’s the lead singer of the Regan’s and well Sara this guy to are left is Tony Bird other wise known as T-Bird the four on the couch left to right Carrie Miller future wife of Doonesbury you known him as B.D. and two the right of them is my band mates Tommy Knocker Bird and Helen Hot Lions 

Sara Richard 

It’s pleasure meeting all of you.

B.D.

Hey Killer were’s your Bro we are up next?

Brad Penny

Last I saw him he was working the crowed same as me 

Shot Ricky Penny enters the seen looks over the group is a little freaked at his bro necking with a chick looks at them and then at the four on the couch.

Ricky Penny

Ok Guys the But Munchers are about done so it’s are turn and let me tell you we better rock cause the crowed’s getting antsy.

Tony Bird

Ok time blow the show 

Shot the Red Eye’s have taken the stage Tommy and his crew are down in the pan looking up Tony takes the mic looks over the crowed and over at Dead Head Bob Jones.

Tony Bird 

Hey are you guys having Fun out there we are the Red Eye’s and we are here to Rock your world one last time hey if you haven’t already gotten to the bar  and checked out all of are CD’s. Cause we hate to admit it but we are sell outs!

Ricky Bird 

Hey A/C D/C said it right money talks!

Tony Bird

Ant that the truth.  Any who some of you who have followed us threw the years might be wondering why I have my shitty base and my PIC Ricky has the Six string well theres two reasons one Ricky wants to sell out even more and go solo and why I have my shitty base that I don’t use much any more is because Ricky won’t let me use his any more.  Freak accident.

Ricky Penny.

Freak you set on Fire you dolt!

Tony Bird

So I wanted see all the different sound a good Base could make!

Ricky Penny

Ya but you could of used your own.

Tony Bird

Why when your’s go up in flames so much better.

Any how Lets get rock-en (Name of song.) On three, one two three.

End Of Pilot Pan the crowed fading in and out focus on Tommy and Brad and Helen the night draws to a close we go one more time on to the stage ware the concert is coming to an end Ricky grabs the mic for one last time.

Ricky Penny

This has been a blast this is the Red Eyes and it’s are final flight thank you and Good Night.

School Days 10th episode

Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene Interior middle school gym

{KAMRON IS WALKING THREW THE HALL WAY PASSING FRIEND AFTER FRIEND SAYING HI SHACKING HANDS.  THERE’S LOUD RAP MUSIC IT’S FUN NIGHT THERE IS GROUP OF KIDS IN CORNER OF THE ROOM KAMRON RECOGNIZES THEM, THERE DIRK,HEATHER,RICK, JIM, AND MICKEY.  AS HE ENTERS THE GROUP HE IS EMBRACED BY THE GROUP. THE KIDS DANCE THE NIGHT AWAY.  MICKEY AND KAMRON SLOW DANCE TO A SONG JUST THEN MITSY CONNER COMES UP TO THEM TAPS KAMRON THE SHOULDER.}

Mitsy: Hey Kamron nice to see you can I talk to your girl?

Mickey: What do you want!

Mitsy: I heard what the Fitch crowed did to you.

Micky: So you want to rub it in become Queen?

Mitsy: No I am going to bring a proposal up to the school board.  And yes I may be popular but I don’t roll with that crowed.

Kamron: What’s the proposal?

Mitsy: I want a dress code I would go so far as Unies but I don’t know if that would fly with the student body.  Do I have your support?

Mickey : Yes and thank you.

{THE NIGHT GOSE ON THE KIDS DANCE AND HAVE FUN.}

Scene interior Biff’s room.

{BRISTEL AND BIFF LAY ON BIFF’S BED TALKING.}

Bristel: Well this really sucks there thinking of putting a dress coed in at school.  I mean I enjoy what I wear at school and that makes me not so worried that people aren’t just looking at these. (points to her glasses.)

Biff: Why are they doing it?

Bristel: Oh I know why.  I was part of food fight that lead to it.

Biff: All thought not every one can afford the high end brand.

Bristel: What you?

Biff: Well if you must know yes.  Why do think I feel so defensive at school.  One of the many reasons I am taking anger management.

Bristel: So you would still look at me if I wasn’t waring what I am today?

Biff: Hell ya!

Bristel: Well thank you Biff.  So Hicks is coming out of the hospital this week and he was at fun night.

Biff: Really is he better now?  We put him through a hell of a lot I put him threw a lot.  Is he getting a heros welcome?

Bristel: He says he dosen’t want one.

Biff: Lying sack of shit!

Bristel: Why don’t you believe him?

Biff: Cause I know if I had been threw all of what we put him threw I’d want one!

Bristel: I am sure he’s just trying to be modest Biff.  By the way speaking of coming home when are you due back?

Biff: Ahh I won’t be back for awhile I still have to go threw somethings before they clear me.  But you know I’d like to be back at school just to apologies to Hicks if any thing else I mean every thing happened so fast.

End Scene 

Scene Interior Mental Hospital Hicks’s room

{KAMRON IS PACKING PARENTS ARE WAITING OUT SIDE KAMRON SLINGS HIS BAG OVER HIS SHOULDER WALKS OUT HUGS BURT AND BRET THEN HIS PARENTS SIGN SOME PAPERS HICKS IS WHEELED OUT IN A WHEEL CHAIR AND THEY GO TO THE CAR AND HEAD HOME.}

Kamron: Why didn’t Carry and Russ show?

Mr Hicks: Your brother and sister they had some things to do at home.

{KAMRON JUST STAIRS OUT THE WINDOW WITH HIS IPOD ON THE CAR DRIVES ALONG THEY COME TO THE HOUSE THE CAR PARKS IN THE GRAGE AND KAMRON ENTERS THE ROOM AND SUDDENLY SIX PEOPLE ARE THERE TO GREAT HIM WITH A BIG SURPRISE AS HE ENTERS HE IS TAKEN BACK A LITTLE.}

Carry: I know you didn’t want a heros welcome but we couldn’t help it.  Cause you know what your a hero in are book.

Kamron: Hey guys it’s great to see you and it’s great to finally be home!

{THE FOUR FRIENDS TO GREAT HIM ARE DIRK, JIM, RICK, AND MICKEY.  THEY HAVE CHIPS, POP, AND PIZZA.  THERE SITTING IN CIRCLE.}

Dirk: So what’s your favorite Kamron moment?  For me it was graduation from elementary  Good View that was great just me and him my dad your dad that was a great day.

Jim: Are times just sitting there drawing in the choir room him in his own world and me in my world.

Rick: hmm Playing Tecmo Football on the Nintendo until are eyes are blood shot.

Mickey: The day in math class when I realized he was the one for me that was a great day.  Kamron helped me get B+ on pop math quizz.

Dirk: Really wow Hicks?  Helped you get a B+

Mickey: Ya after that I new it be me and him.

Kamron: You know I am scared.

Dirk: How so man?

Kamron: What happens if I never get better?

Rick: Will cross that bridge when we get there.  But will always be there for you know matter what!

Dirk: Yup!

Jim: Ditto 

Mickey: The future is scary Hicks but as long as you have us will make it through the tuff times and hope fully share in the good ones.

Kamron: I am not ready to grow up yet.

Dirk: Who ever is but it happens.

Kamron: Some faster then others.

{KAMRON TAKES A SIP OF POP THINKS FOR A BIT LOOKS AT HIS FRIENDS WONDERING WARE HE IS GOING TO BE IN THE NEXT 4 YEARS AND THINKING HE IS READY FOR IT BUT NOT YET READY TO GROW UP HOPPING TO ALL HELL HE CAN STAY A KID FOR JUST A BIT LONGER. THE PARTY COMES TO AN END THE FRIENDS SAY THERE GOOD BYES KAMRON SITS AT HIS COMPUTER AND STARTS TO WRITE A STORY THAT HE WILL NEVER FOR GET.}

Scene interior School the next week.

{KAMRON WALKS THREW THE HALL WAY GOING TO HIS FIRST CLASS OF THE DAY. HE WAVES TO FRIENDS AND WELL WISHERS IT’S THE FIRST CLASS OF THE DAY IT’S MATH  AND AS KAMRON ENTERS COOL STANDS UP WALKS OVER TO KAMRON AND GIVES HIM A BIG HUG THE REST CLASS FOLLOWS COOL LEAD UNTIL IT’S BIG CLASS GROUP HUG.}

Cool: Welcome back buddy we missed you.  Ok guys Starting to lose air in here.

{THE KIDS DISPERSE BACK TO TABLES.}

Mr. Long: Ok class if you’ll open up your books will start with square roots 

{KAMRON SITTS WITH MICKEY THEY HOLD HANDS AND THINKS TO HIM SELF HE’S READY FOR WHAT EVER COMES.  BUT ONE THING HE IS NOT READY FOR IS TO GROW UP AT LEAST JUST NOT YET.}

End episode

AM/FM 21

By: Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene interior office building of charity partners 

{DAN SITS AT A COMPUTER ANSWERING QUESTIONS TO FIT HIM WITH A KID HE FINISH’S THEM AND THEN IS MATCHED WITH THREE GIRLS AND ONE BOY.}

Candice: So you want a girl or a boy?  We normally match males with boys and females with girls but seeing as the fact we only have one boy match to you I’ll give you the choice.

Dan: Who’s the boy?

Candice: A Harvy Grover!  We have tried to match him before he has problems.  Lives with Mom, Dad died in Iraq has some family.  Kind of a trouble maker that’s why they suggested him for this program for him.

Dan: Hobbies?

Candice: Loves writing, comic books and music.

Dan: You know I’ll take him.

Candice: Well first he has to accept you and I will set up a meeting between the two of you.  I’ll set up the meeting this day works best for you?

Dan: Umm any week day weekend’s I work.

Candice: Ok thanks for coming in Dan I’ll let you know when the meeting time will be. Between the two of you.

{DAN SHAKES CANDICE HAND THEY PART COME TO THE END OF THE MEETING.}

end Scene 

Scene Sally sits in coffee shop working on her computer.

{SALLY IS WORKING AT HER COMPUTER SOMEONE SITS DOWN AT HER TABLE IT’S AN OLD FREIND FROM HIGH SCHOOL HECTOR FORTH.}

Sally: So it’s been what three years.

Hector: At least.

Sally: What the hell are you up to.

Hector: Law school U of M.

Sally: That’s great!

Hector: Some Body told me you were going out with Little now?  Hows that coming?

Sally: Well we are friends but we called it quits on the relation ship.

{THEY TALK FOR A BIT LONGER CATCHING UP ON OLD TIMES.}

end Scene.

Scene Mall, Dan, Jack and Little sit at the Taco Bell in the park.

{LITTLE GETS A TEXT MESSAGE ON HIS COMPUTER HE HAS IT OPEN AND HE IS LOOKING AT IT.}

Little: Got Text from Sally!

Jack: She’s crosse town isn’t she waiting to meet with her sister some ware?

Little: Yup oh wow!

Jack: What.

Little: She ran into Hector Forth!

Dan: Who’s he?

Jack: Only the most interesting kid in high school at the time we were there.

Little: Ya every body had to be his friend.  He was student body president and the guy who threw the biggest graduation party.

Jack: And Yet I think you should feel threatened right Little?

Little: Why?

Jack: I think if I remember he had a thing for Sally.

Little: ya but who didn’t?

Dan: But Little you said it your self he is the most Interesting kid in high School!

Little: I don’t think he would make a move on Sally I mean he was a good friend!

{SUDDENLY THERE IS A DING ON LITTLE’S COMPUTER LIKE HE GOT A TEXT.}

Little: He made move on Sally!

Jack: Wow Told you.

Little: She is not going to be at 500 ticket friday!

Dan: Well that makes two of us.

Jack: Big Date?

Dan: Sort of I am meeting with my match friday from partners.

Jack: So it’s going to be the two of us Little what do you want to do?

Little: Gay 90’s?

Jack: Didn’t know Sally would drive men to such behavior?

Little: No I am not turning gay.  But it is the hottest club in town ware else am I going to strut my stuff.  You think Jill would be up for it?

Jack: Why because she a Lesbow?

Little: That and she likes to party! 

Jack: Want me to bring Tammy?

Little: Sure?  I’ll see if Jill can get the time off I know she usually works on friday.

Dan: Well good luck getting in I think the age is 21.

Jack: He’s right you know.

Little: We could always sneak in.

Jack: And how are we going to do that?

Little: Well Jill.  She’s 21 and may know the bouncer.

Jack: Wow this friday night may just end in disaster!

Little: Come on wares sense of danger Jack! 

Jack: Hey I know my limits and those limits include sneaking into the Gay 90’s.

Little: Come on Amigo I know your up for it!  Here I’ll text Jill right now.

Jack: Ok Jill may be up for a night out but the chances she’d be willing to sneak us into a club and the chance she know’s the bouncer are…

{THERE IS A DING ON LITTLE COMPUTER.}

Little: She dose and she is up for it.  Oh and she feels sorry for me so we are in.

Jack: This is not going to end well I know it.

{DAN LOOKS DOWN AT HIS WATCH LOOKS TO THE TWO OF THEM.}

Dan: This has been fun guys but I got to get home and walk the dog and meet Max.  Hey good luck this weekend guys.

Scene Interior Max Nell’s studio.

{MAX AND DAN SIT WORKING ON COMICS AND STORIES.}

Dan: Meet my kid this friday.

Max: You’ve told me he is interested in writing.  Bring him by I’ll show him my work.

Dan: Ya I’ll bring that up to him. Ever sneak into clubs Max?

Max: In my younger years but it’s not all it’s cracked up to be.

Dan: Why’s that?

Max: When I was in I was always to scared to enjoy my self.  It’s much more fun when your 21 your not worried your going to get caught.

Dan: My friends are going to try to get into the Gay 90’s

Max: Oh god I remember those days.  But they’ll get over it or get caught one of the two.

Dan: Well Here is the latest story board for you.

Max: You know you could almost do this your self.

Dan: Believe me your way better then me Max.

Max: No I mean it sense you’ve been working on these things your skill has improved.

Dan: Thanks Max but I don’t think I ready for that least not yet.

end scene

Scene Exterior out side gay 90’s Jack, Little, Tammy, and Jill are waiting in line.

Tammy: This is not a good Idea.

Jill: Will you guys relax I know the bouncer plus he owes me one.

Scene Interior partners office building Dan is meeting with Harvey and his mother.

Jackie Grover: So your a writer?

Dan: Yup here is some the stuff I’ve written.

Harvey: Who’s this Caricature?

Dan: Well I brought him cause this what I wrote as a kid.  Never published it cause it was a little to fictional because tell you the truth I really don’t know that much about drug lords.

Jackie: Well that’s good.

Harvey: Whats his name?

Dan: Lone Wolf.

Harvey: Why is his suite white?

Dan: Because it is a Karate out fit he sowed the hood on.

Harvey: Why is he fighting crime?

Dan: His brother died at the hands of kid’s who dealt drugs.

Harvey: Younger or older?

Dan: Younger one day he was trying to hang out with his brother and be cool and his brothers so called friends got him killed so that’s what made the older brother become a vigilanty.

Harvey: Thats pretty cool.

Dan: Would you like me to mentor you? 

Harvey: Yay only if you can handle my baggage Dan.

Scene Interior Club Gay 90’s

Jack: I can’t believe we got in!

Tammy: So this is Club Jack what am I missing?

Jack: Well a lot of bumping grinding people kissing.

Tammy: Boys and Girls?

Jack: Ya you could Say that!

Jill: Relax Jack Hey I am going to find my friends I got text from them!  Wait I See them there over in the conner there lets go Come on.  Little don’t worry some are straight I’ll introduce you to them!

{JILL LEADS THEM OVER TO WARE HER FRIENDS ARE. THERE THREE OF THEM.}

Jill: Hey girls!

Sara Lott: So these are the Law breakers!

Jill: Ya like we never broke any laws!

Sara: “Snicker”

Gale Kline: So Little Heard Sally Broke up with you!  You know Kyle dumped me.

Little: Sorry to here that.  But I am sure this is temporary It’s not like Sally sleeps on the first date will be back to gather!

Scene Interior Sally is in bed.

{SALLY’S ALARM IS GOING OFF SHE IS SOUND ASLEEP SUDDENLY SHE HERES A VOICE IT’S HECTOR FORTHS.}

Hector: Hun could you shut that off I am not ready to get up!

{SUDDENLY SHE IS WIDE AWAKE REALIZING WHAT SHE HAD JUST DONE.}

End episode.

School Days 9th episode

By Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene Interior family aria of mental ward.

{JIM,RICK,DIRK AND KAMRON SIT WATCHING T.V. THERE PARENTS TALK IN THE BACKGROUND.}

Rick: So you dropped the charges why?

Kamron: I’ve gone threw with this with my shrink Rick.  I wasn’t sure when I threw the chair and I wasn’t sure of what all happened.

Dirk: But Biff admitted to it right?

Kamron: Ya after the cops pressured him to I mean I don’t want him doing time for something I might of caused.  Don’t get me wrong I am still pretty pissed it happened I’m pretty pissed that I am in here.

Dirk: What do you need from us?

Kamron: I guess this just being there for me.  I mean there’s a part of me that really wants a Heros welcome when I come back.  I heard all sorts of stuff that I wanted during the trial.  I mean is it ok to be greedy at time like this?

Jim: I guess it’s all in how you handle it.

Kamron: Ya knowing me I would probably get big head and be the big shot.  Damn you Billy Joel!

Rick: Hey Kamron want to sign my brace it’s not exactly cast?

Kamron: Holy Shmit dud you must have the hole student body on that thing.

Rick: Ya it’s pretty awesome right!

Kamron: Nice Dirk Who ya gonna Call! LOL.  Jim Thats a big Twinkie!  Hmm I got to think of a good ghostbusters quote?

Rick: How about it Just popped in there?

Kamron: What just popped in there?

Jim: Oh great here we go!

Rick: I tried to think? Of the one thing that could never ever possibly ever destroy us. Mr Stay Puff!

Dirk: (Snicker)

Kamron: Nice thinking Ray.  You know we quote this any more and well need to pay a royalty!

Rick: Ya but isn’t that what friends do sit and quote lines from movies they have memorized?

Dirk: Yup and there, there for there friends in there time of need.

Kamron: Ya thanks guys I really needed this.

Jim: We are there for you buddy get better and hey will see about that heros welcome!

Rich Fik: Hey boys want to rap it up visiting hr almost up.

Jim: Sure thing dad.  Well (grabs Sharpie of the table in back.) Lets get this over with.

{KAMRON SIGNS THE BRACE ON IT, IT SAYS IT JUST POPPED IN THERE AND THEN HIS NAME.  THE KIDS SAY THERE GOOD BYES.}

End Scene 

Scene Interior mental ward it’s group time.

{HICKS IS FEELING DOWN AND MISSING SCHOOL AND HIS CLASS MATES GROUP IS COMMING TO AN END.}

Kamron: I wanna have a night out with friends!

Dr. Hogg: I can see if I can get you a weekend pass.  Do you need to connect with any body?

Kamron: Well I want a night out maybe go to fun night ware I can see the maximum amount of my friends.

Dr. Hogg: I think this will be a good test for you Kamron.  Also if you do well we might discharge you I’ll be sure to get you some medication for you to take home.  Hey how are the nightmares?

Kamron: Better but I still have them maybe getting to see some of my friends will help me.

Bret: Well here’s to hope fully getting out Hey you want me and Burt’s number?

Kamron:  Ya that would be Majorly Cool!

Bret and  Burt: Major Cool (They Salute Hicks.)

{THEY LAUGH AND HAVE FUN BRET AND BURT GET HICKS THERE NUMBER.  HICKS  GOSE TO HIS ROOM PIKCS UP THE PHONE AND DIALS THE SWITCH BORED TO GET AN OUT SIDE NUMBER.}

Scene interior Hicks hospital room

Kamron: (the phone rings and Mickey picks up the phone.)  So hun guess what I am comming home just for next weekend!

Mickey:  Really I am going to tell every one this so cool we should have a party!

Kamron: Well I’ll be at fun night friday will you be there?

Mickey: Wouldn’t miss it for the world!

Kamron: You know it’s just great talking to you.

Mickey: Ya I miss you.  Well I am going threw a tuff period in my life.

Kamron: Really whats going on.  

Mickey:Well John my brother well he is on his way to college after this year.

Kamron: Did he get into Cal?

Mickey: Yup but I don’t know how I am going to handle things without him?  He’s the rock in my life.  Oh and I got into a fight.

Kamron: Oh not over me I hope?

Mickey: No but it was stupid I lost my cool!  I was trying to sit with the crowed I started out with well they sorta started making fun at the fact I wore the same dress twice in two day’s.  They called me Mickey Two times.  Any way I lost it and lashed out them.  Bristel tried to stand up for me and then that made it worse because they started to call her four eyes.  Any way long story short there was a lot of food thrown.  Tarry and Bristel did there best to help me but mob rule and I got in trouble cause they said I started the fight once again Bristel and Tarry stood up for me but in the end I got detention could been worse but sines they didn’t know who started it they just gave me detention.

Kamron: Jesus maybe we should have a dress code and maybe uniforms but I am not ready to take that on I am just getting over the last fight I put up.  But I hope they let you come to fun night with detention and every thing.

Mickey: Well maybe I can get a reprieve from the school for me being your girl any way thanks for the good news I let every body know.

Scene Interior Mickeys bed room

{MICKEY HANGS UP THE PHONE JOHN KNOCKS ON THE DOOR HE HAS JUST GOTTEN BACK FROM DEBATE TEAM.}

John: Want to talk?

Mickey: Mom told you didn’t she.

John: Yay.

{JOHN LOOKS IN AT THE SADNESS IN MICKEYS EYES.}

John: Well are family has never been that rich and I am not going to make it any better.  Sure the schooler ship I got will help but mom and dad will still have to pay for room and what ever other expenses that incur.  Your going to miss me aren’t you?

Mickey: Well yay definitely I don’t know if I can handle being the only kid in the house for four years.

John: Well will Skype every night if we have to.  Cause you know I’ll miss you too.

Mickey: I’m thinking of joining the chess club next year!

John: That’s great I guess the apple doesn’t fall to far from the tree.  What about debate I can give you pointers.

Mickey: Whoa one step at time there.  But will see hey do you think I could be as smart as you one day.

John: Well with time and hard work sure.  In the mean time you need any help with home work?

Mickey: Na I am starting to get the hang of this.

John: Well I’ll be here if you need me.

Mickey: Thanks John!

{JOHN SMILES AND CLOSES THE DOOR.}

end Episode.

AM/FM 20th episode

By Chrisdavis F. Neal 

Scene exterior Minneapolis park 

{DAN AND K ARE PLAYING TOSS WITH A STICK DAN HAD FOUND THERE ALL SORT OF PEOPLE AROUND THE PARK DAN IS FEELING MANLY CAUSE GIRLS ARE WAVING AT HIM OR MORE AT K CAUSE DAN IS THROWING THE STICK TOWARDS THE BIKE BATH WARE MOST OF THE GIRLS ARE K BRINGS HIM THE STICK THAT DAN HAD THROWN DAN THROWS THE STICK SUDDENLY HE REALIZES HE HAD THROWN THE STICK A LITTLE TO FAR DAN TELLS K TO STAY AND K STAYS AND WATCHS DAN WALK INTO THE BIKE PATH TO GO PICK UP THE STICK DAN GRABES THE STICK SUDDENLY A GIRL ON ROLLER BLADES CRASH’S INTO HIM.  DAN CATCHES HER AS THEY GO TO THE GROUND.}

Dan: Whoa 

{THEY ARE ON THE GROUND.}

Dan: You ok?

Candice Becker: I think?  You should watch ware your going.

K: Yipp, Yipp!

Candice: Nice dog.

Dan: Thanks this is K.  K say Hi.

K: Yipp, Yipp!

Candice: Nice I saw you guys playing on my first lap.

Dan: Well I am enjoying K while I still have him.

Candice: What do you just rent dogs to get girl’s?

Dan: Uhh No K is part of the Seeing Guide dog program.  I am a volunteer.  I only train him until he’s big enough for a Pro to take him.

Candice: Thats commendable.  The names Candies Becker.  You are?

Dan: Dan, Dan Hector! 

Candice: Dan do you have a cell phone?

Dan: Uh yeah.

Candice: Here give it to me.

{DAN HANDS HER HIS PHONE SHE TYPES HER NUMBER INTO HIS CALL LIST. AND THEN TYPES DANS NUMBER INTO HER PHONE CANDICE RIDES AWAY SUDDENLY DAN PICKS UP HIS PHONE AND CALLS JACK TO TELL HIM WHAT JUST HAPPENED.}

Scene City streets Dan and K are headed back to the apartment 

{DAN WALKS A WAYS COMES UP TO HIS APARTMENT IT’S A SATURDAY SO HE HAS TO GET READY FOR WORK AT SUB SHOP WHICH IS WHAT IS SUPPORTING HIM AND HIS HOBBY WHICH ALSO BRING IN A LITTLE MONEY.  DAN WAITS UNTILL HE HERES A HONK DOWN STAIRS IT’S JACK AND MATT.  HE WALKS DOWN TO THE CAR AND GREATS THEM.}

Scene Jack’s car there driving to work.

Matt: So dose this mean your officially over Tara?

Dan: Well I don’t know I just met this girl so Jack told you?

Jack: Yup I tell you doing a good thing comes right around.

Matt: You were always big on mythical things Jack hens Face your Fears day.

Jack: Hey unlike luck which I still think is real.  Karma is real.

Matt: Ya right I could do a hundred bad things and not have a bad thing happen to me.

Dan: Sure you could if you want to piss off all your friends.  I am with Jack on this one Matt sure Luck can be argued weather or not it’s real.  But with Karma if you don’t do enough good things real bad things will eventually happen.

Matt: Is that a bet Dan.

Dan: What no.  Matt do you have a gambling problem.

Matt: Don’t change the subject but why do you think I have a gambling problem?

Dan: You tend to make a lot bets.

Matt: When have I done that?

Jack: Your bet’s with me for the flask of Irish cream!

Dan: Not to mention you run the pool at school for the final four.

Jack: Your bet with Little which I still think is underhanded.

Matt: Ok maybe I like to gamble is there a crime in that?

Dan: No, but I think your luck will run out if you keep gambling.

Matt: Hey I don’t believe in luck all my bets are mathematically calculated.  There almost fool prof.

Dan: Then how come you haven’t one a final four bracket in the two years you have been doing it?

Matt: Can I help that Sally picks on the basses of fuzzy mascots and screws up my math in the mean time.  I mean it’s uncanny she gets all the upsets.

{THEY COME TO THE MALL AND ENTER THE SANDWICH SHOP TO START THERE DAY OF WORK.  MATT DOSE HIS BEST TO NOT DO ONE GOOD THING TO ANYBODY JACK, DAN AND HILTON THERE BOSS ARE GETTING A LITTLE TICKED OFF WITH MATT AND HIS ATTITUDE.  IN FACT MATT GOSE HOME ON THE BUS PRETENDING TO BE SICK.}

Scene interior sandwich shop end of the day.

{JACK AND DAN BUST THERE ASS WHILE HILTON IS DOING BOOK WORK FOR SCHEDULING FOR NEXT WEEKEND WALKS IN AND SEES THE GOOD JOB JACK AND DAN ARE DOING SMILES TO HER SELF WALKS UP TO THEM HANDS BOOTH OF THEM TEN PERCENT OFF CUPONS THEY THANK HER IT’S THE END OF DAY JACK AND DAN ARE AT THE ORANGE JULIUS GETTING AN END OF THE DAY REWARD FOR EACH OTHER THE MALL IS GETTING CLOSE TO CLOSING TIME.  WHEN DAN GETT’S A PHONE CALL.}

Dan: Dan Here!  Candice hey you want to go out.

{CANDICE IS GETTING DONE WITH HER WORK.}

Scene interior office building Candice’s law office.

Candice: Actually I have a offer of a life time for you.  Oh and if you wondering I have a boy friend.  But I was seeing that you like helping out with charities.  I was wondering. See I work with a charity called partners.

Scene Interior food court Mall.

Dan: And what dose partners do?

Candice: We match young boys and girls who need mentors with adults.  I was wondering if you’d be interested?  I have a few kids I haven’t matched yet can I see if I can fit you with some one?

Scene interior Mall food court.

Dan: Umm sure love too.  Ok sure sure,  See you then ok Thanks Candice.

Jack: Well you in?

Dan: No but I may be in a Mentoring program.

Jack: Wow!

Dan: Yeah Me mentoring some kid.  I wonder if it be bad for the kid to know I dropped out of college.

Jack: But you have so much to offer other then that.

Dan: Like what?

Jack: Your a hard worker, you do charity work and your a semi successful writer.

Dan: Very True.

Jack: Well you ready to call it a day?

Dan: Ya and then we got to get ready for tomorrow.  Think Matt will be up for work tomorrow?

Jack: Ya I hope he is over his point making.

Dan: And to tell you the truth I don’t think he made his point at all cause I think we scored points with the boss today (Holds up his 10% off coupon.)

Jack: Yup and Matt struck out.

End episode.