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The Transport 9th chapter.

9th Chapter of the Transport
By Chrisdavis F. Neal.

{Planet Grip-There are three men: one of them is Tango and the other is Ben Dapper. Tango’s friend, the third man, is Ben’s Butler.  The Butler has a ceremonial laser for Tango and for Ben.}

Tango Mars: Well let’s get this over with.

Ben Dapper: You and my father killed her Tango.  I feel like she loved you, and would have died for you, and she did.  Now you visit her on the anniversary of that day?

Tango Mars: Yes, your father is a hard and stubborn man.  We never did see eye to eye,  but you must know that I loved your sister more than you will ever know.   Your father couldn’t let that be, and on our wedding I visit her grave.

Ben Dapper: Are you leaving right after this?  You know Captain Briggs will be waiting for you.

{The three men have knowledge that Captain Briggs has men waiting for Tango outside the cemetery.  The Butler, Mr. Right, has the lasers, along with two gloves waiting for Tango and Ben.  Ben takes one of the gloves, walks up to Tango, slaps him with it and Tango follows suit.  They take the guns, have their backs to each other, walk three paces, turn and fire.  Ben fires at Tango, but Tango doesn’t fire back.  Tango feels the pain shoot through his body and then drops to the ground.  Ben and his Butler grab Tango and carry him to the entrance of the cemetery ware Captain Briggs is waiting for them.}

Captain Dan Briggs: What happened here?

Ben Dapper: The job is done. Tell my father.

Captain Dan Briggs: So why do you still have the body?

Ben Dapper: He might be the man who killed my sister, but he still deserves a proper funeral.

Captain Dan Briggs: Should I call a hearse?

Ben Dapper: We have one coming. My Butler had one ordered up.  We just weren’t sure whose body it was going to be.

Captain Dan Briggs: Such is fate.

{Ben and Mr. Right load Tango into the casket, get into their limo, and drive. Ben calls his father.}

Ben Dapper: The deed is done father.  Call off your Dogs.

Dan Dapper: Very well. Fate has played its card.  I’ll call off the dogs.

{Captain Briggs and his men follow the hearse and the limo to the morgue. The hearse delivers the body, Captain Briggs, and Ben.  Dr. Fisher looks over Tango who appears to be dead.}

Captain Dan Briggs: So Doc, is he dead?

Dr. Fisher: He’s dead all right, but I won’t know what caused it until I do the autopsy.

Captain Dan Briggs: So can we get to it?

Dr. Fisher: No.

Captain Dan Briggs: Why the hell not?

Dr. Fisher: You cannot get it because I have a lot of bodies to take care of at the moment, not to mention the damn flu that recently hit the retirement home.  As such, I am a little preoccupied right now, so would you kindly mind leaving? I can’t do my job with a police force hovering over me!  Now Go!

{Dr. Fisher shoes out the police.  Captain Briggs takes his men outside and leaves two men behind.  Ben and Mr. Right head home. Dr. Fisher looks at Tango looks at the apparently dead Tango.  She then takes out a needle, fills it with a substance, and injects Tango with it.  A surge of warmth shoots through Tango.  Color comes back to him as Dr. Fisher feels his pulse.  As she takes his pulse, Tango opens his eyes.}

Tango Mars: Hey there beautiful.

Dr. Fisher: You know it’s getting harder and harder to get you off this planet.

Tango Mars: Well I am hoping this will be my vanishing act.  That will make it easier for me to visit my wife at least once a year.

Dr. Fisher: So what happens when you make a delivery with your face?  You know Dan has you on a leash.

Tango Mars: It’s simple.  I have sold my company to the Drake boys.  All I have to do is teach Dan how to fly and make deliveries.  I can live off my Guard pension.

Dr. Fisher: Well, I have to prep your double for the police and you need to get out of here! I’ll have my intern fix you up.  Most of the police are gone, but I think Briggs left a few behind.

Tango Mars: Thanks Doc, your the best.

End Scene
Open Scene: Dan and Eric’s Seahorn freighter

{Tango sneaks his way out, and begins his way abroad and is homeward bound. It’s Dan and Eric’s Seahorn freighter because Tangos has been impounded.  Dan is at the controls and Tango is keeping a watchful eye on Dan.  Dan is still learning to fly even though he has his permit.}

Tango Mars: Say Dan, how’s physical therapy going?

Dan Drake: Great.  I’ve been getting a lot stronger as of late.

{Just then Eric Drake enters the cockpit.  He is standing over the two gentlemen.}

Tango Mars: When is your time up?

Dan Drake: I have this month yet, and then I am done.

Eric Drake: So then when are you going make your move on Rip?

Tango Mars: Rip?

Eric Drake: Just a girl that Dan had a crush on back in school.

Tango Mars: You big flirt!

Dan Drake: What can I say, I like the ladies!

Tango Mars: Well don’t go spreading yourself around too much, it might come back to bight you. They don’t call it the love bug for nothing.

Dan Drake: You talking from experience Tango?

Tango Mars: She was a special lady, but I had two in my life and I had to choose.

Eric Drake: So did you choose the right one?

Tango Mars: There isn’t a day that goes by that I ask myself that question.  I’m sure it is a question that will always linger around me, but the answer I continue to come to is always the same: yes.

End Scene

Open Scene: Guard Garage on planet Tusk.  Jamie and Victor Chase are working hard on repairing ships.

{Jamie is doing some work on a ship and Victor is getting some signatures from a few men who have brought more work for them.  The day is finally winding down and Jamie is covered in dirt and grime.  Victor isn’t looking so hot himself.  They’re sweeping up and putting things away.  They get done and Jamie heads for the Monastery.  She gets to her room flops on the bed.  She lies there and is relaxing.  Just then there is knock on the door and Jamie slides open a part of the door to look through the peep hole.   It’s Sister May.

Sister May: I have news for you.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Sister, I am really tired.

Sister May: We need to talk.  It’s about Tango.

End Chapter.

The 8th chapter of the Transport!

8th Chapter of the Transport
By Chrisdavis F. Neal

Scene: Space Hanger on planet Tusk

{Jamie has her head down and Bob is whistling like “oh boy round two”.}

Bob Beck: Relax Jamie, it’s only a month.  We’ve spent longer together.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: True, being stranded on planet Cool with you and Dirk was long enough!

Bob Beck: Aren’t you for getting Tango?  I did not have fun that night.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well I know I had fun!

Bob Beck: That’s because you weren’t sharing a sleeping bag with Tango!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Yeah, good times.

Bob Beck: Yeah for you and Ridale.

Jamie smirks at Bob’s remark.

Bob Beck: I swear that Tango is gay.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Really? Nah.

Bob Beck: Well the way he cuddled with me let me tell you, he gave me the shivers!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: I am sure he was just trying to stay warm.

Bob Beck: A month and half doing survival training with our platoon on planet Cool. God that last week of training was a long week.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Yeah losing our group that last week wasn’t good.

Bob Beck: Sharing sleeping bags and eating MREs for a week while our patrol tried to find us.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Good times, good times.

Bob Beck: Yeah, for you!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Gave us a good story though.

Bob Beck: Yup, it sure did.  One gay-ass story!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: For you! She smirks once more.

Bob Beck: Well since we are all caught up here I want you to report to the shop.  Are you still a good mechanic?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: A little rusty, but I can still tinker with the best of them.

Bob Beck: Good, because we have a few ships that need servicing.   Clock-in and report there.

{Jamie salutes Bob and heads for the repair shop. Jamie reaches her location and looks around.  There is a lift in the middle of the floor with a fighter on it and what looks like two more fighters waiting for repair.  She goes to the office desk and there appears to be nobody around.  Jamie notices there is a bell as she peers into the booth and rings it.}

Victor Chase: Hold on there will you! I am on my lunch break.  I’ll be with you in fifteen minutes.

{Victor Chase has a love for both spaceships and food—as he is rather large—but is a nice man overall.  Jamie walks over to a work bench and looks down at touchpad.  She punches in for the day, looks at the orders and what needs to be done.  She sees the ship on the lift and that it is in need of an oil change.  “Seems simple enough”, she thinks to herself.  She goes and does the required oil change and then does a diagnostic on the ship.  There are several things wrong with it and she immediately gets to work.  As she is underneath the ship Victor, having just finished his lunch, is surprised to see someone doing his work.}

Victor Chase: Who the hell is using my equipment?

{Jamie’s head is covered by the ship.  She wheels her cart out from under the big ship and gives a big smile to Victor.}


Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Papa Chase!

Victor Chase: Jamie my girl!  I’m sorry to hear about Ridale.

{Jamie gives a shrug.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: It is what it is. I’ll get over it with time.

Victor Chase: Well it’s good to have you back!  Bob isn’t still giving you that look is he?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: It isn’t anything that I can’t handle for a month.

Victor Chase: So why are you back with us girl? Tango kick you out on your fanny?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Actually I should have kicked him out on his.

Victor Chase: Okay, so what did he do?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: The jerk gambled away our insurance policy!

Victor Chase:Victor smirks.  Sounds about right.  Since you’re here I might as well take an hour long break.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Don’t let Bob catch you slacking off. You know how he is a stickler for the rules.

Victor Chase: What can he do to me? Fire me? I am practically retired any way.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: It was great seeing you again Chase.  Now let’s get back to work!

{The two get back to servicing the ship. The day goes by.}

End Scene

Begin Scene: Interior Rehabilitation Facility on Dun Bar

{Dan is hard at work doing his rehabilitation.  His Dad is letting him use the facility for free, because of the gambled away insurance policy.  A cute instructor is working him hard and Dan is having trouble not looking at her chest, as she is ripped with muscle. Dan feels self conscious even though he is no slouch, he just does not have a six pack.}

Rip Parker: Okay Dan, work that arm! We’ve got to get that shoulder up to snuff. You lost a lot of blood and muscle.  You’ve got it buddy, one more! Can you give me one more?!

{Eric Drake is just coming in from a drop off.  He walks in to the clinic and peers in to the gym.  He sees his brother hard at work and Rip, who is an old friend.  Dan is now doing a curling machine.  Rip is looking directly at Dan, Dan is looking directly at Rip’s chest, and Eric is now looking at his brother over Rip’s shoulder. Dan doesn’t notice his brother is looking at him, as he is still fixated on Rip’s chest.  Eric laughs to himself.}

Eric Drake: So Bro, you enjoying the view?

{Dan doesn’t notice for bit, but Rip and Eric look at each other.  They both laugh as Eric is peering over Rip’s shoulder. Rip and Eric look at each other . Dan gets done with the curls, gets up, and then cleans the sweat off of himself not noticing Eric.}

Dan Drake: Okay Rip, you will bill my father right?

Rip Parker: Rip smirks.

{Dan leans down to set his towel back as Eric comes right up to him.  They are now face to face.  Dan realizes Eric had probably been there awhile.}

Eric Drake: Another half hour staring at Rippa’s chest I see.

Rip Parker: Nothing I can’t handle.  We were in gym class back at school.

Dan Drake: Yup, great times.

{Rip is now filling out paper work. She hands Dan a form to sign and Dan is lost in her chest again.}

Eric Drake: Dan, focus!

Rip Parker: Rip cracks a smile. Yup gym class all over again.

{Dan comes to and signs the paper work.}

Rip Parker: Hey you two, since your both back in town why don’t we hang?

Eric Drake: Yeah, I’d like to catch up with the old gang again.

Rip Parker: Why don’t you stop by Tipper’s bar and we can catch up?

Eric Drake: Yeah that would be nice.  What time?

Rip Parker: Well I get off in an hour. I’ll call the old gang!

Eric Drake: I’ll get into my best uniform, throw some water on my bro, and see you in a hour.  Dan come on, let’s jet!

Dan Drake: Dan comes to. He is still in a little trance.

Rip Parker: God, see you guys in an hour.  She laughs.

{The two leave to get spruced up.}

End Scene

Open Scene

{We open in a planet that Tango had been too many times.  In fact he stops there often. It is the home world of his childhood.  The planet Grip, aptly named due to the fact that once it has you in its claws, it is hard to escape the Grip.  The love that Tango had lost still resides there.  He sits looking at a stone on the ground and cries a bit.  He looks up to see another man come up to the stone.}

Ben Dapper: Well you ready to do this?

Tango Mars: It’s a stupid tradition.

Ben Dapper: She was a hell of a women.

Tango Mars: And I killed her.

End Chapter.

The Big Box Store 10th episode.

The Big Box Store 10th episode.
By Chrisdavis F. Neal

Open scene TSC at the Big Box Store Holy is at the computer Winter walks by.

{ Winter is hmming a tune and is walking to punch in for the day leans over and gives Holy a Big Smile and shows Holy her wedding band.}

Holy: Sorry I couldn’t make it girl I see things went well.

Winter: Well the vows at least went well!

Holy: Oh my!

Winter: I was this close to losing it and going Bride Zilla on every one!

{Rex walks by after hearing this leans over to Holy.}

Rex: Don’t let her fool you Holy she did loose it.

{We see bits and peaces of Winters wedding as she is giving her story to Holy.}

Winter: Ok so the First part of the Disaster that was my wedding was the fact the Vegetarian option for food had meat in it and Bailey and a good portion of the guest were vegetarians.  Also the cake was totally wrong the lucky thing was that nobody was allergic to it.  Oh and the band got shit faced and was out of tune.  Uggh the hole thing was a night mare.

Holy: Tell you the truth most of them are I remember my wedding at least you had cake!  My dad improvised and got every last doughnut from the local doughnut shop.

Winter: Nice!  Oh and to top it off there was big break up at the wedding!

Holy: Oh My who is not seeing who any more?

Rex: Well Jim and Bialy called quits after Bialy got Hammered and noticed Jim eyeing up Trinity.

Holy: Oh my!

Winter: Let’s just say the vows and the ceremony saved the day.

Rex: The ceremony and the church were lovely

Holy: Well I am happy for the booth of you, you make a good couple.

{Jim is in bed he has the day off he is listening to Emo music and recovering from London he is going threw new photos taken from London the ceremony and is still hurting suddenly his phone buzzes!  Its Trinity she’s at a coffee house with some friends  }

Trinity: Hey Jim still hurting?

Jim: Well ya and these pictures I am looking at aren’t helping.

Trinity : Hey me and couple of my friends are going out you want to come?

Jim: You think that’s a good Idea I mean what about you and Mr. Long distance relation ship?

Trinity: I am not looking to date you Jim but I’d like to remain friends plus I might have some friends that might be on the market.  And you won’t find any one sitting home and listening to Emo music!

Jim: How can you tell?

Trinity: Well you got it on pretty loud.  So get into some party cloths and have night out on the town with some potentials.  Meet us at G Diggers at Nine be there or be square!

Scene interior Kylie’s office

{Kylie sits at her computer almost in tears seeing the recent sales and expenditures there not looking good.  suddenly her phone rings it’s corporate.}

P.J: Hey Kylie girl how long has it been?

Kylie: Kinda wish it was longer.

P.J: Ya you know why I am calling right!

Kylie: I know are sales have been lagging but fourth quarter will be coming up!

P.J: You still will need to cut hr’s or people your call oh and less pizza days ok.

{Kylie and P.J say there good bye and Kylie puts her head down and she has a break down. Frank comes by and notices her crying. Frank hug’s her she gathers her self.}

Frank: What happened you get dumped or what?

Kylie: It’s not that at all I got call from corporate!

Frank: Ahhh!
Kylie: And I got to cut hrs or some ones position.  I think every body is going to have to Tie-ten there belts.  Well better in form the troops.

{Grabs her walkie calls over the walkie!}

Kylie: (over the walkie so every one can hear.)  Crew gather in aisle G for huddle.

{All the employees available walk over to the aisle of G.  Kylie starts huddle.}

Kylie: Ok word of the day is Tie any one says this do the wave.

Dolly Brown: Huh ( Dolly is new.)

Rex: Oh Dolly it’s a little game we play.

Winter: It’s fun and it’s from Pee Wee’s play house.

Rex: Only we do some odd movement  if we were to scream we would scare the customer and they would give us a weird look.

{Dolly is still a little clueless.}

Frank: Dolly’s New Bee all right.

Kylie: Ok So guys Hr’s are going to have to be cut.  Oh and kiss pizza days good bye maybe on black Friday.

Frank: Oh well looks like I am going Dutch for lunch.

Rex: Lunch I am skipping it all together with my budget.

Frank: Well there always roman noodles and frank O american!

Rex: What do you think I have for lunch now!

Kylie: We are not letting people go yet note the yet so push those sales and lets wrap up this meeting and TIE (Every one does the wave.) it in to a big naught.

{The store is a buzzing with activity buzzing people are doing there work.  We go from work to Jim apartment he is getting ready for his night out.  Jim gets dressed and walks out his door locks his door walks to G Diggers it is about 8:30 he’s a little early sits at the bar looks up at the barkeep it’s a a girl with jet black hair and has smile on her face.}

Donna Dee: So what can I get you?

Jim: Water for now thank you.
Donna: Have I seen you be for?  Jim is it?

Jim: Yup!

Donna: So you in college?

Jim: Nope just graduated two years ago today.

Donna: So did you find a job with that major?

Jim: Donna isn’t it?

Donna: Thought I’ve seen you here before!

Jim: And no not my dream job!  But my Big Box Crape job.

Donna: So what is your dream job.

Jim: Child Therapist.

Donna: No Shit! I work at camp for kids we are always looking for people with experience in that field, and  it would be good way to get your foot in the door.  Here’s a card give me a call and I’ll set you up!

{Trinity and her friends show up Jim says his thanks and takes the keeps card and has a night out.}

End episode.

30th episode of School Days

30th episode of School Days
By Chrisdavis F. Neal


Scene Open: Lakeside. Kids are all on snow shoes.

{The group: the Fiks, the Dents and their friends have snow shoes on.  Jim keeps tripping over himself and the group is having fun at his expense.  He finally gets the hang of it and is going at a good pace. Mickey, Linda and Raven are hanging back and watching the boys cruise along.}

Mickey Dent: So when are you going to let Jim in on the secret?

Raven Shields: You told her didn’t you Linda?

Linda Shields: It just sort of worked it’s way out…Sorry!

Raven Shields: Well you should know Brent dumped me.

Linda Shields: Ah! Raven I am sorry.  So you don’t want Jim to know?

Raven: No I don’t.  I like him very much so I’d like to keep that flame burning. Hey boys, wait up for us!

{Jim is flying now as the rest try to keep up.}

Biff Mark: Going for the new Winona land speed record Mr. Fik?

{Jim reaches the end of the path, turns back, and heads for the warming house }

Jim Fik: Last person to the warm house buys hot cocoa for everyone.

{Jim hightails it to the warm house.  Linda and John lag behind so as to be the couple to pay for the cocoa. The group reaches the warm house.  John and Linda buy everyone cocoa and they lounge in the warm house chairs. Biff is being very inquisitive.}

Biff Mark: So Jim, everyone has probably heard the story of how you guys met, but I haven’t yet.

Raven Shields: German camp.

Jim Fik: Cross-country skiing.

Raven Shields: Well, I was skiing.  He was doing his best not to fall over!

Mickey Dent: That story never gets old.

Biff Mark: So you two met many kids at German camp.

Jim Fik: Yup.  Brent Fisher and I are Facebook friends now.

Raven Shields: Along with a host of other kids, but Jim and Brent did hit it off.

{Mickey is looking at Brent’s Facebook page.}

Mickey Dent: It says here that he’s in a relationship, but with who I wonder?

{Raven throws Mickey a look like, “what the hell are you doing?”  Mickey gives Raven a look back like, “it is time he should find out.”}

Jim Fik: Hmm.  Yeah, who?

Raven Shields: He always had a thing for Pip?

Jim Fik: Pippy Marshal?  Really? Brent hasn’t said anything to me. When did this happen?

Raven Shields: Choir class.  They sat across from each other hit it off.

{Mickey shakes her head and under her breath says “jerk.”  Raven is now glad no one else has a computer with them other than Mickey’s smartphone, which Mickey is not using for now. }

Jim Fik: So how long ago was this?

Raven Shields: About the same time they got back from German camp.

Mickey Dent: {under her breath.} Just digging a hole…

{The day turns to night and the group disperses.}

End scene

Open Scene: Raven’s hotel room. She is on her cellphone.

{Raven is talking with Pippy Marshal.}

Raven Shields: Should I tell him?

Pippy Marshal: If you do, the whole week will be a wash.

Raven Shields: I am so glad my parents paid for this hotel.  We could have ended up staying with the Fik’s!

Pippy Marshal: So, are you going tell him and cut the vacation short?

Raven Shields: No, I still have feelings for him. Man, what am I going to do! Brent still hasn’t updated his stats and I sort of told him you’re dating Brent.

Pippy Marshal: What did you just say?

Raven Shields: Sorry!

Pippy Marshal: Raven, you need to tell him because you’re digging a hole you won’t be able to get out of soon. You do know that Jim has Brent’s number.  He’s going to talk with him eventually.  I’m sorry to leave you like this, but my dinner is waiting. I have to go, but you should tell him.

{There’s a knock at Raven’s door. She says goodbye to Pippy, looks through the peephole in the door, and see’s that it is her mom. They are going over to the Fik’s for dinner.}

End Scene
Open Scene Jim Fiks room.

{Jim is on the phone with Brent and there catching up!  Raven’s family are on there way from the hotel Jim and Brent are conversing just as Raven family car is pulling up to the house The Dent’s and John’s girl friend are in the Fik’s living room.  Brent lays the news on Jim,  Jim is about to have a emotional break down walks out to the living room just as Ravens family enters Jim is on the verge of tears Raven looks him eye and feels his pain and Raven walks over to him and give’s him a emotional hug as to say I am sorry }

End episode

The Transport 7th chapter.

The Transport 7th episode
By Chrisdavis F. Neal

Open scene on Gongy: Tango and Jamie place the kitchen table.

{Tinsdale sits at the kitchen table. Across from her is Trapper John. They are looking at case files.}

Trapper John: So Riley and Miley are both Gypsies. Wiley the pirate has no last name!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: I killed Wiley. The guy had a laser to my head. I didn’t have a choice.

Trapper John: So I am thinking that these three are family, but you think if they were family they would travel together.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well my guess is if we find Barron Vannor, then we find Rilye and Milye.

Trapper John: But here’s the thing, where do we find the Barron? I mean he’s a pirate. He’s not exactly going to be in the same place twice.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: What if we run his number and find the place he’s been arrested at the most.  My guess is that we find him.

Trapper John: That actually sounds like a descent idea.  So should we set up a sting?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: What do you think will attract him the most Swambolie Beer or diamond’s from Smirk?

Trapper John: Diamond’s from Smirk!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: So how are we going to get them?

Trapper John: Well, it is a sting. We can get them from the guard!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Here’s the thing, the two of us are no longer in the Guard, which means we are going to have difficulty getting them!  Additionally, the fact that I got one of the Guard’s top agents killed won’t help.

Trapper John: What if?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Nope.

Trapper John: Ah, come on! You can reenlist!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Not going to do it!

Trapper John: But it’s perfect. You need an insurance policy, we need to avenge Dirk’s death. It’s perfect, not to mention if you join the Universal Guard it’s only one month a year.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: That is if there is not a war going on!

Trapper John: Right, and when is there ever a war going on?

{Jamie glares at John as if to say “you have got be kidding, right.”}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Alright, I’ll do it! But, if I have to salute that dick I am out!

Trapper John: I’m sure Bob isn’t in the Universal Guard. He’s straight Guard.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Okay, I’ll go to the recruiter tomorrow.

{John checks his phone and then looks up at Jamie.}

Trapper John: Well, the wife is calling. She wants a night together, so I have to get going.  See you at Tusk, and good luck getting those bastards.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Thanks for your help John and have a fun night out!

End scene

Open Scene: Trapper John and Bacall Ridale’s hotel room.

{John and Bacall’s hotel room. They are getting ready for their date on Gongy.  They get all gussied up and ready to cut a rug. They dance the night away and take their seat.  The drinks they ordered are delivered to them.}

Bacall Ridale: So,why did Jamie join the Guard then?

Trapper John: Well she was in the foster system and wanted out. As soon as she turned eighteen, the legal age to join, she jumped at the chance.

Bacall Ridale: Do you know anything about her family?

Trapper John: She was dropped off at the local Guard Monastery and lived under the care of the Nuns for most of her life. She always wanted more, though. She wanted family I guess (I always thought she wanted a family)

Bacall Ridale: Weren’t the Nun’s her family?

Trapper John: She had the maternal aspect of it, but she never had the father figure in her life.

Bacall Ridale : So that’s why she joined. Why did she leave?

Trapper John: Well, like I said she never had the father figure, and her father figure in the guard was Tango.  So when Tango left, she followed.

Bacall Ridale : Really? That’s it? She left for Tango?

Trapper John: That, and Bob Beck was really getting to her.

End Scene

Open Scene: Planet Tusk Recruiting office

{Jamie sits filling out paperwork in the recruiter’s office.Jamie gets done filling out the paperwork and hands it to the lady at the reception desk.}

Mrs. Peach: Okay, it says here that you have flight experience. We have an opening in the Orbit Patrol.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Is that a one month or a one year commitment?

Mrs. Peach: It’s a one month commitment every year.  Shall I put you down?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Yup.

Mrs. Peach: Okay, we will process your paperwork and get back to you within a week.

End Scene

Begin Scene: Gongy Bar

{Tango sits at the bar sipping on some swambolie beer. A man in uniform walks by with some other men in uniform. The man spies on Tango at the bar, slaps Tango on the back and takes a seat.}

Captain Bob Beck: Tango, old man, how’s my old flame Jamie doing?

Tango Mars: When was she ever your flame Bob? You knew she always had a thing for Dirk.

Captain Bob Beck: She hurting much for Dirk?

Tango Mars: Yeah, she misses him. Are you still at the old Tusk post?

Captain Bob Beck: Yeah, but I’m not in the Guard anymore.  I’m actually heading up the Orbit Patrol now.  I left because I got a civilian job and Ridale still resented me for having a thing for Jamie.

Tango Mars: With Ridale out of the way you can make your move on Jamie.

Captain Bob Beck: You think?  Maybe I will…  Well I should join my crew. You are welcome to join us if you like Tango.

{Tango and Bob drink and laugh up the night.}

(End Scene?)

Open Scene: the Monastery of planet Tusk

{Jamie is being led to her old room by the Mother of the covent.}

Mother Mary: Your room is ready and waiting for you, Jamie!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Thank you Mother Mary

Mother Mary: How long will you be staying with us?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: My commitment to the Orbit Patrol is about a month, so I shouldn’t stay any longer than that.  Well, I have to put away my stuff and then report to the Patrol.

{Jamie enters her room and throws her stuff on the bed.  She gets into her uniform, walks down to the local transit station, takes it to the base, reports in, and, as she is reporting in, her superior walks up to her.  It’s Captain Bob Beck!  Jamie hangs her head.}

End Chapter

School Days 29th episode

School Days 29th episode
By Chrisdavis F. Neal


Open Scene: Lacrosse Airport.

{THE DENTS ARE WAITING FOR JOHN’S PLANE AND ALSO JOHN’S BIG SURPRISE! MICKEY IS A LITTLE ANTSY.  JOHN AND LINDA COME THROUGH THE GATE AS THEY ARE LETTING PEOPLE THROUGH!}

Mickey Dent: Johnny!

{MICKEY RUNS TO HIM AND GIVES HIM ONE BIG HUG.}

Mickey Dent: Who’s this?

John: Dent: This is the other lady in my life I was talking about!

Linda Shields: Hi, I am Linda!

Mrs. Dent: We talked over the phone, Linda.  I made up the spare bed and it’s wonderful to meet you.

{THE GROUP HUGS ONE ANOTHER AND THEY HEAD OUT TO THE CAR.}

End Scene

Open Scene: Dent’s house. They are on the couch looking through picture books.

{JOHN, MICKEY, LINDA AND MRS.DENT ARE PAGING THROUGH PICTURE BOOKS. LINDA HAS A FEW WITH HER.}

Linda Shields: So here’s a picture of my niece Raven!

Mickey Dent: Wait, this person looks familiar.  Looks like Jim’s girl from the cities. Cameron’s friend from school.

Linda Shields: Wait.  Nah, I think you have the wrong person.

Mickey Dent: Why?

Linda Shields: ‘Cause she is dating someone!

Mickey Dent: She looks very familiar though. Who is she dating?


Linda Shields: Some kid in her class.  Wait, I think I have a picture of him and he’s very athletic.  They went to German camp together.

Mickey Dent: That’s strange that’s how Jim and his fling met!

Linda Shields: Here’s a picture of her fling at German camp.  Here they are with a couple of their friends.

Mickey Dent: Wait, that’s Jim there!

Linda Shields: Hmm. So, my Raven has been cheating on Jim Fick?

Mrs. Dent: This can’t be good.

End Scene!

Scene Interior Jim Fick’s room

{JIM IS ON THE PHONE WITH RAVEN WHILE WAITING FOR HER TO ARRIVE.}

Jim Fick: So, I have us meeting my friends at the coffee shop for conversation and maybe a movie.

Raven Shields (ON THE PHONE IN THE BACKSEAT OF HER FAMILY CAR): Ok, sounds fun!  We will be there in about a hour or so. Oh, by the way, my cousin is going to be in town too.  We should link up with her. She is staying at the Dent’s house.  Do you know them?

Jim Fick: No kidding. Yeah I know John and Mickey.  Mickey used to date Cameron, whom you met through Skype.  He will be at the Coffee shop.   Oh, and I thought we might go snow shoeing along the lake with the crew.  There is a place you can rent them.

Raven Shields: Sounds like fun!  We’ll be pulling into the driveway in an hour so I’ll talk to you then!  Love you.

Jim Fick: Love you too.

End Scene

Open Scene: Mickey Dent’s bedroom.

{MICKEY IS ON THE PHONE WITH BIFF.}

Biff Mark: So, Jim’s girl is two timing him?

Mickey Dent: Yup.  So, should I lay it on him or just let it lie?

Biff Mark: Gee, let me see what Cameron would do!

Mickey Dent: Wait, Cameron has advice on his blog about this.

Biff Mark: No, but I can send him a text and get advice.  Give me a second here…There, just shot him a text.

Biff Mark: Okay, he says to defer to the other partner.

Mickey Dent: So he is saying I should ask Raven before I tell Jim?

Biff Mark: Pretty much.  So what you are going to do?

Mickey Dent: Well, I guess I’ll ask the girl, but I still feel it’s unfair that Jim doesn’t know. At the same time I guess Raven is still deciding on who to go with, so we should keep out of her business. It still pains me that Jim is left clueless, though.

John Dent: (John rap’s on Mickeys door.) Hey big shooter! Coffee shop. Let’s go.

Mickey Dent: Well, I’ve got to go. Will I see you there Biff?

Biff Mark: Definitely.  So what are you going to do?

Mickey Dent: Well, I guess the pain of not knowing is better than the pain of knowing

Biff Mark: Plus you don’t know who this Raven is going to go with in the end.  It’s better to let her decide I guess, but it’s still going to be difficult for both parties involved.  Still, you should let her work it out instead forcing the issue and making it hard for both parties. (CHECK)

Mickey Dent: Well, love you!

Biff Mark: Love you too!

End Scene

Open on Cameron’s room.

{BRISTOL AND CAMERON SIT ON HIS BED.  HE HAS JUST FINISHED TEXTING BIFF?} (?)

Bristol Becker: So, Jim’s girl is two timing him?

Cameron Hicks: Yup.  I wouldn’t go spreading it around though, at least that’s what I told Biff.

Bristol Becker: Wow, talk about restraint!

Cameron: I mean, if you want a relationship to end, go ahead and go for the kill.  If you want something to bloom, however, leave it alone and let nature take its course.

Bristol Becker: Wow. Deep. I wish I had your restraint, because I know if I had known about this without talking to you I’d be blabbing this all across the internet.

Cameron Hicks: They don’t call me Cupid for nothing.

Bristol Becker: “LOL” (CHECK)

Cameron Hicks: Whaaat?

Bristol Becker: Just because that’s your self-given alias does not mean everyone calls you Cupid!

Cameron Hicks: Oh come on! All the advice we give plus the number of hits we get, it’s like I am cupid.

Bristol Becker: I think someone is getting a big head.  Besides, not all the advice we give is good.

Cameron Hicks: When have I ever given bad advice

Bristel Becker: (glares at Hicks and laughs.) Okay, for the most part it’s been good advice. I do have to admit that.  Just because you have saved relationships doesn’t mean that that is a good thing.  Some relationships deserve to die like Jim and Raven’s.  I mean, does Jim really deserve to not know that Raven is two timing him?

Cameron Hicks: You would rather end the relationship, break Jim’s heart, and possibly break Ravens heart?

Bristel Becker: It’s better than having Raven string Jim along and then break his heart in the end.

Cameron Hicks: Well what if Raven chooses Jim?

Bristel Becker: Let’s flip this. Let’s say that I were two timing you.  Wouldn’t you like to know?

Kamron Hicks: The question should be, would you want me to know?

Bristol Becker: Really?!

Kamron Hicks: Really. If there was a possibility of me finding out, it would totally be your call in the end. Sure you may not tell me directly, but, in the end, it’s the cheater that makes it known.  This is in spite of the fact that the cheater may not even be directly responsible for the results.

Bristol Becker: Okay Cupid, My mom just texted me she is on her way.  So see you tomorrow

Cameron Hicks: Definitely.

end Scene

Scene Open on coffee shop group is gathering

{Mickey and her family are meeting Jim and his family Raven and Jim are mingling Linda looks to Raven as to say are you going to tell him?  Raven then throws a hand jester as to say DL.}

end episode.

The Transport 6th chapter

The Transport 6th Chapter
By Chrisdavis Neal.

Open Scene on Planet Gongy Tango and Tinsdale place there in the dining room.

{TINSDALE THE DRAKE BOTHERS ARE LOOKING AT TANGO.  TINSDALE IS REMING TANGO A NEW ONE.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: You lost are insurance policy in a card game!  A card game!

Tango Mars: What can I say I had the perfect hand I couldn’t lose!

Eric Drake: You do know those games are rigged!

Tango Mars: I have always found that the Dwarves are very fair I haven’t lost to much money there.

Eric Drake: That’s because they wait until the right moment and then they pounce.  When I turned 21 my father threw me a big party on Smirk they took us for every thing luckily My father got wise!

Tango Mars; What did he do?

Eric Drake: He figured out there tricks and planted dealers that were friendly to are cause at the tables we took them for every thing then maid peace with the lost funds we had lost returned to us plus a down payment for Dany’s 21st birthday which is coming up.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well we must get are insurance policy back but for now I have to talk with the Ridale family and set up the funeral which {points to Tango.} you are going to help me with.

Tango Mars: Time to get the crew back together again I wonder if there still mad at me.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: That is true may be I’ll make all the calls.

Dan Drake: Wait what happened?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Tango is a bit of a gambler and a drunk.

Tango Mars:  I sorta gambled every ones paycheck away at Smirk.

Eric Drake: So you don’t lose much of your money at Smirk!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Nope just every body else’s!

Tango Mars: To be fair I did pay it all back in full

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Very true! 

Dan Drake: So how are we getting are insurance policy back?

Eric Drake: I’ll talk with dad but won’t promise any thing.

Dan Drake: How did you pay it all back that must of been one hell of a hall?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: One smelly fast long hall

Tango Mars: Think Swambolie beer smelly

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Lets just say Tango’s ship was smelling to high hell for days.

Tango Mars: Hell the guest quarters bathrooms and it wasn’t me.  The captain quarters.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Lets just say I was staying away from Tango for a while. Well I got to make phone calls and you two {Points to the Drake brothers.} should check the wire for any shipments and try to be care full with out that Insurance policy we can’t do much for repairs.

Eric Drake: Come on bro lets hit up the wire for shipments

Tango Mars: Well I’m going for drink and see what comes my way later guys

{THE FOUR PART THERE WAYS TANGO GOES TO THE BAR FOR A DRINK AND A BIGHT TO EAT ERIC IS ON HIS COMPUTER LOOKING FOR SOME GOOD DELIVERIES AND ERIC IS DOING SOME REHABE TINSDALE IS MAKING PHONE CALLS.}

end Scene

Begin Scene Tango sits in the bar wondering what the hell he’s going to do.

{TANGO IS DROWNING HIS SORROWS IN SOME SWAMBOLIE BEER.  JUST THEN A PRETTY BIG GUY APEARS AT HIS TABLE.}

Tango Mars: Trap Trapper John How the hell are you!

{TANGO’S CARES GO AWAY AND HE EMBRACES THE MAN.}

Traper John: Tinsdale said I would find you here.  So you lost your Insurance policy?

Tango Mars: Long story you down about your brother in law?
Traper John: I defiantly want to get the sons of bitch’s!

Tango Mars: I am going to miss Ridale.

Trapper John: He was a good man!

Tango Mars:  Remember that night on Gongy he whipped all of us in a drinking game!

Trapper John: Yup he told me his piss smelled like beer for the next three days.  Stinky Swambolie beer.

Tapper, Tango: LOL

Trapper John: How’s Jamie taking this?

Tango Mars: Her normal Strong headed way.  I still don’t know why she turned down Ridale when he proposed to her?

Trapper John: That’s because she has special place in her heart for you old dog.

Tango Mars: Don’t know why I mean I am not exactly a lady killer.

Trapper John: Right!

Tango Mars: Don’t get me wrong I did all right when I was young but why would she have a place for me in her heart for me now?

Trapper John: Well She’s an orphan joined the guard at age 18teen you were sort of her 
father figure and Ridale was like her big bro so you guys were her family so when you left she followed and left Ridale with a ring and a broken dream.

Tango Mars: I can’t believe they still dated after that.

Trapper John: Ridale doesn’t hold grudges that’s what I like about my brother in law.

Tango Mars: But here’s the thing Jamie does!

Trapper John: That’s why I pity the perps that killed Ridale cause if I know Jamie she’s thinking about them right now and what to do to get them

End scene

Begin Scene open on Tinsdales bedroom

{TINSDALE IS ON THE PHONE CALLING PEOPLE FOR THE FUNERAL TEARING UP A BIT JUST THEN THE DOOR BELL RINGS TINSDALE PUT’S DOWN THE PHONE AND ANSWERS IT IT’S DIRK RIDALE SISTER.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale:  Bacall Ridale!  My god it’s been for ever.

Bacall Ridale: So when are you comming back to Tusk?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: After I get the planing done of course the funeral will be on Tusk.

Bacall Ridale: So how Tango?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well the Jerk lost are Insurance policy so we aren’t really talking.  Did you get the files I asked you to bring.

Bacall Ridale: Yup but I don’t know if there going to be any help but here they are.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Thanks Bacall.

Bacall Ridale: Well I am going to join my husband at the bar a bunch of us are going to have drink with Tango!

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Have fun I’ll join you later right now I want to look at this.

Bacall Ridale: Well when your done come find us at the bar K.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale:K and thanks again.

{JAMIE MULLS OVER THE BLODER.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Barron Vannor! Hmm say’s he’s 60 old guy wonder why he is still a pirate Wily dead yup I killed him.  Family is a bunch of Gypsy and pirates daughter 
Rylie wife Mylie.  Barron Vannor family Darren Vannor.

{TINSDALE PHONE RINGS TANGO IS ON THE OTHER END ALONG WITH HER FORMER GAURD PATROL AND THERE CREW.}

Tango Mars: Jamie I know your mad but your missing a killer party you need a break girl get down here Trapper is going to break Dirk drinking recored hurry you’ll miss it Girl.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: I can never stay mad at Tango but this I got to see.

{TINSDALE JOINS THE CREW AND THEY PARTY AND THEY REMEMBER DIRK RIDALE THEY TOAST TO HIM. WE END CHAPTER.}
end chapter

School Days 28th episode

School Days 28th episode
By Chrisdavis F. Neal



Open Scene school Cafeteria three kids sit looking at a computer.

{JIM, RICK AND DIRK SIT LOOKING AT JIMS NEW COMPUTER COMPLIMENTS OF KAMRONS WALK WORK SHOVELING THAT IS.}

Jim: Yup it’s got every thing including a terra bight of memory.

Rick: So have you checked out the latest Zomba quiz.

Dirk: Yup which Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy caricature are you!

Rick: Which one did you get Dirk?

Jim: Does that question even needed to be asked?

Dirk: You do know it may surprise you guys but that Caricature isn’t even in that book or radio show!

Jim: I always wondered about that but then again I am not much of a reader that is if it isn’t a graphic novel.

Dirk: So can we end it with the Hitchhiker nick name?

Rick: I don’t know it just sort of fits you {Looks at his cell looks up at group.} I mean he’s still a Dougless Adams caricature.

Dirk; You just looked that up didn’t you?

Jim: What Rick read?

Dirk: The both of you god all the thinking you two do.  You would think you guys would pick up a book once and awhile!

Rick: What can I say there is watching writing and games to do just because I am a quote  nerd doesn’t mean I have my nose  stuck in a book all the time. {goes back to his  I-phone.}

Jim: Thats because he has his head buried in his I-phone reading a blog no doubt!
Who you reading?

Rick: Oh Kamron’s blog.


Dirk: Wait Kamron has a Blog?  Hicks has a blog?

Jim: God they let any one who can type have a blog!

Dirk: Whats it about.

Rick: It’s mainly advice on dating kinda like love line but it’s not bad I have used some of his advice on Kimmy and it’s worked.

Dirk: Oh I can tell this going to cause a stir at the PTA!

Jim: Ya a blog run by a kid who I wouldn’t exactly call a player giving advice on love!  Whats his handle.

Rick: Get it strait and long from the boy who’s been up to bat twice!

Jim: Are Hicks and Bristel still dating?

Dirk: They wont be after this!

Rick: Actually  I think Bristel is his editor!

Jim; Yup she is wow how to put the spark in relation ship walks along the lake are perfect to take together!  I should try that with Raven!

Dirk: And how you going to do that prey tell take this fine note book along the lake!

Rick: Hate to have you ruin the lap top the first week!

Jim: You guys do realize winter break is coming!

Rick: Going up there or is she coming here?

Jim: She’s staying here!

Rick: So will meet the mysterious Raven I mean in person and not threw Skype

Jim: Yup and you’ll meet her parents to

Rick: Wait you popping the question at age twelve?

Dirk: is that legal!

Jim: No but it’s 2hrs from the City’s and it is still illegal for her to drive at age twelve!.
Rick, Dirk: Ahhh

end Scene

open Scene School Library Bristel and Kamron sit looking at a computer

{BRISTEL AND KAMRON SIT MULLING OVER IDEAS FOR KAMRONS BLOG THEY ARE QUICKLY RUNNING OUT OF IDEAS.}

Bristel: I got it we need to do a top ten list that can be voted on!

Kamron: You mean like an love advice top ten?

Bristel: Ya and we can do different one each week

{BIFF AND MICKEY WALK INTO THE LIBRARY TO DO HOME NOTICE KAMRON AND BRISTEL.  MICKEY PEERS OVER BRISTEL.}

Mickey: Working Kamrons blog I see!

Biff: Wait Hicks has a blog!

Bristel; Actually it’s more like are blog!

{MICKEY READ’S A LINE THAT KAMRON HAS JUST POSTED.}

Mickey: Yup me and Kamron use to do that all the time!

Biff: Whaaat?

Bristel: You have actually painted toe nails to gather.

Biff: You want me to do your nails Mickey?

Mickey: Only if you can handle lovie dovie stuff while we do it!  Kamron was always good at it!

Bristel: Some thing Biff lacked!

Biff: Hey I can be just as smooth as Dr. Love over there!

Mickey: So you want to paint my nails after we are done with the library?

Biff: Challenge excepted!

Bristel: Wow Biff stepping up I think I am turned on!

Kamron: Ok now I feel sick!
Bristel: Ok Dr. Love take the heat or get out of the kitchen I mean this blog we are doing is all for getting people turned on in there love life.

Biff: By the way has the PTA found out about this blog?

Kamron: No why?

Biff: Cause web sight aimed at putting romance into a middle school relationship might get a red flag I mean we all know what romance leads to right!

Kamron: and What does it lead to Biff!

Bristel: Come on Dr. Love get a clue!

Mickey: Kamron was always clueless when it came to sex.

Kamron: Ahh!

Biff: There the light came on!

end Scene

Open Scene Kimmy’s Bed room she is on the computer!

{KIMMYS MOM ENTERS THE ROOM.}

MRS.Turner: Kimmy get ready for bed!

Kimmy: Ok mom just let me finish this!

Mrs. Turner: What are you reading?

Kimmy: Just Kamrons Blog why?

Mrs. Turner: Just being a nosie parent that’s all

Kimmy: Ok I’ll go get ready for bed then!

{KIMMY LEVES HER LAB TOP OPEN HER MOM PEERS AT IT.}

Mrs. Turner: Oh my!

end episode.

The Transport chapter 5

The Transport chapter 5
by Chrisdavis F. Neal.

Scene out side Captain Jamie Tinsdales hotel room

{JAMIE IS WONDERING WHAT THE HELL TO DO SHE IS NERVOUSLY TAPPING HER CELL PHONE SHE TEXT TANGO NOTHING SHE TEXT DAN AND ERIC DAN IS SITTING IN A BAR WHILE HIS BRO IS BACK AT THERE HOTEL ROOM DAN IS TALKING UP THE CUTE WAITRESS.}

Dan Drake: So my dad is king of planet and me and my bro are trying to work are way back into his favor.

Calie Forth: So why did you and your bro loose your title?

Dan Drake: Well my brother and I fled a battle field in order to stop a war.

{CALIE IS LOST IN HIS EYES AND PUTTY IN HIS HANDS.  DAN PHONE STARTS FLASHING THERE IS TEXT.}

Dan Drake: Jamie’s in trouble!

Calie Forth: Who’s Jamie?

Dan Drake: She’s part of are freighter fleet but she is on vacation?  Ridale in trouble planet Tusk

Calie Forth: You know I have always wanted to go to planet Tusk.

Dan Drake: Hey when I get vacation time!

{JUST THEN ERIC ENTERS THE PICTURE HE’S AT THE DOOR TO THE BAR THEN AT THE BOOTH WHERE DAN AND CALIE ARE.}

Eric Drake: Come on bro Tinsdale needs us.

{DAN GETS UP TIPS CALIE AND THEN GIVES HER A PASSIONATE KISS.}

Eric Drake: Come on you big flirt.

{DAN GAZE’S AT CALIE THEN THINKS FOR A MINUTE.}

Dan Drake: Hey Keep me on speed dial love!

{ERIC PULLS DAN AWAY FROM THE BAR BOOTH AND THERE JET SET ON THERE WAY TO PLANET TUSK.}

End Scene

Begin Scene interior Hangar on planet Tusk.

{TINSDALE IS PACING BACK AND FORTH ERIC AND DAN ARE ON SOME CRATES LOOKING AT JAMIE WHO IS PACING.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale:  He’s probably dead.  God this is all my fault!

Eric Drake: So they got him hold up in this doc?

{ERIC HAS ON HIS CELL PHONE THE LAY OUT OF THE HANGAR BAY HE’S PROJECTING IT ON THE WALL.}

Eric Drake: So there’s to entrances.  If Tinsdale can draw are objectives out and heres hoping we can take them out

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: So you’ll come from the north and I’ll come from the south.

Dan Drake: Well lets soldier up and head out!

{THEY HEAD OUT JAMIE GOING TO THE SOUTH END OF THE HANGER BAY AND THE BOYS AROUND THE NORTH ENTRANCE JAMIE LOOKS OVER THE  HANGAR BAY AND SEE RIDALE TIED UP HANGING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE BAY IT’S DARK BUT SHE CAN MAKE HIM OUT JAMIE TAKES A STEP INTO THE BAY JUST THEN A SPOTLIGHT IS SHOWN ON HER AND RIDALE.  JUST THEN A VOICE SPEAKS OUT.}

Rylie:Take another step and he gets it.  Nows a test of good faith did you come a lone or did you get help?

{THE DRAKE BOYS ENTER THE SCENE ERIC DRAKE UNDER HIS BRETH TO HIS BROTHER.}

Eric Drake: I can make out figure up on that ledge!

Dan Drake: Can you get a clean shot?

Eric Drake: Yup I’ll take perp out got your lazier knife?
As soon as I take out the sniper go for Ridale who’s hanging there.

{ERIC TAKES A SHOT JUST THEN HIS BRO GOES FOR RIDALE SUDDENLY FROM ANOTHER PART OF THE BAY A SHOT RINGS OUT CLIPS DAN,  DAN GOES DOWN.}

Eric Drake: DAAAANNNYY

{DAN FLOPS TO THE GROUND HE IS LOOSING BLOOD.  TINSDALE TAKES OUT HER BLASTER GOSE FOR RIDALE AND TAKES OUT HER LAZIER KNIFE LEEPS TO RIDALE AND CUTS THE WIRE HE HAS BEEN HANGING FROM TINSDALE UNTIES RIDALE LOOKS INTO HIS EYES AND HER HEART SINKS TO THE BOTTOM RIDALE IS DEAD ALWAYS HAD BEEN TINSDALE IS DODGING FIRE JUST THEN ERIC AND TINSDALE GRABE DAN WHO IS BLEEDING ON THE FLOOR.}

Eric: We got to get my brother to a medic before he loses any more blood.  Is he (points to Ridale who is on the floor.)

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Yup he was dead to begin with!

Eric Drake: Well if we don’t hurry my bro will be too.

{JAMIE AND ERIC HIGH TALE IT TO THE NEAREST GAURD MED BAY WHICH IS LUCKY THAT THERE IN A PLANET TUSK HANGOR CAUSE IT BELONGS TO THE GAURD.  THEY MAKE IT JUST IN TIME.  THE GAURD DOC PATCHS UP DAN AND BILLS ERIC AND JAMIE.  DAN IS LYING ON A BED GETTING A BLOOD TRANSFUSION ERIC AND JAMIE WALK UP TO HIM.}

Eric Drake: So how did it feel to be near death?

Dan Drake: Well to tell you the truth I must of not been that near cause I didn’t see a light.

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well that’s because you were out cold.

Dan Drake: So what’s the damage?

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Well your lucky your employed by two former Guard soldiers.  We have some of the best health insurance in the universe.

{THEY HELP DAN OUT OF THE BED AND HEAD BACK TO THERE SHIPS.  TINSDALE THEN LAYS IN HER BED LOOKING AT THE PICTURE OF RIDALE THINKING ABOUT HOW SHE NEEDS TO FIND THE GROUP THAT ENDED RIDALE’S  LIFE.  WE GO BACK TO DAN AND ERIC.  DAN IS WORKING ON HIS PHYSICAL THERPY TO GET BETTER AND HAPPY TO BE ALIVE.}

End Scene

Scene Interior of a diamond mine on planet Smirk.

{TANGO IS IN A INTENSE GAME OF CARDS WITH SOME OF THE DWARVES FROM SMIRK TANGO THINKS HE’S GOT THE GAME IN THE BAG ALL THOUGHT HE’S A LITTLE LOW ON CASH HE HAS ALREADY TAKEN A ADVANCE ON HIS  DELIVERY HE THINKS A BIT LOOKING AT HIS HAND THINKING ABOUT HOW HE COULD NOT LOSE GOES TO HIS SHIP AND TAKES HIS INSURANCE POLICY THROWS IT ON THE TABLE AND THE DWARVES CALL HIM HE THROWS DOWN HIS CARDS HE HAS LOST THE GAME.}

End Scene.

Begin Scene Interior Dan at physical therapy on Tusk.

{DAN IS STILL ON MEDICAL LEAVE FROM HIS NEW JOB HE IS WORKING HIS WAY BACK TO HEALTH HE PUTS IN HIS TIME IN PHYSICAL THERAPY .  DAN GIVES THE CLERK HIS INSURANCE CARD IT’S DENIED. DAN PUTS DOWN HIS HEAD.  DAN PAYS FOR HIS TIME OUT OF POCKET LUCKLY IT’S NOT TO BAD.}

End Scene

Begin Scene Interior Inside Sea Horn freighter Tinsdales to be exact.

{TINSDALE IS GETTING SOME REPAIRS DONE ON HER FREIGHTER NOW THAT HER VACATION IS DONE EVEN THOUGH SHE ISN’T TO RELAXED IN FACT SHE IS STRESSED.  THE MECHANIC GETS DONE ANALYZING THE SHIP TINSDALE A HANDS THE MECHANIC HER CARD IT GETS DENIDE JUST THEN TINSDALE REALIZES WHAT HAD HAPPENED.}

Captain Jamie Tinsdale: Tango and that damned planet Smirk!

End scene

End episode.

The 27th episode of School Days

The 27th episode of School Days.
by Chrisdavis F. Neal

Scene Interior Local Comic shop

{BRISTEL AND KIMMY ARE PERUSING THE COMICS.}

Bristel: I just don’t get it whats wrong with just words?

Kimmy; Common Bristel just words.  I mean without pictures you wouldn’t get you this!

{KIMMY THROWS UP A PICTURE OF ZOMBIE DECAPITATING SOME ONE.}

Bristel: Eww

Kimmy: Yup definitely see you as an Archie lover.

Bristel: Why cause theres always the Hardy Boys.  i just don’t see the need for pictures when theres my mind!

Kimmy: Come on River Dale is calling Bristel.  What are you Betty or Veronica?

Bristel: Actually I am more Mig.

Kimmy: You were always one for more stable relationships.  Hey Frank here’s my latest group.

{FRANK RINGS KIMMY UP.}

Bristel: So he never ask your for ID?

Kimmy: We have an understanding plus it’s not like I am buying porno’s or Japanese art  if your into that sort of thing.  Come on Rick and Kamron are going to meet us at the coffee shop.

{BRISTEL AND KIMMY WALK A WAYS COME TO THE COFFEE SHOP.}

End Sccene

Scene Interior Coffee shop.

{KAMRON AND RICK SIT PLAYING A INTENSE GAME OF CHESS.  BRISTEL AND KIMMY ORDER COFFEE.}

Kimmy: So who is winning?

{RICK HOLDS UP HIS HAND AS INTO SAY NOT NOW!}

Kimmy: Ok then I see you have Kamron pined down as usual.

Kamron: Wait a minute I think no wait he’s

Rick: and that’s check and mate my bro!

Kimmy: Another lazy sunday coffee and chess

Rick: Did you pick me up my DMZ?

Kimmy: Yup!

Kamron: So did you see any thing you liked over there Bristel?

Bristel: I just don’t get comics what’s wrong with a hard cover with nothing but words?

Kamron: Cause words don’t give you the artist vision plus words don’t give you this!

{KAMRON HOLDS UP A PICTURE OF ZOMBIE DECAPITATING A PERSON ONEC AGAIN.}

Bristel: That is so unfair!

Rick: How so?

Bristel: I mean sure Comics can give you the words and pictures.  But when I have a book it’s just me and my mind and if you say a comic is more graphic try reading Zodiac and then tell me that!  I mean in many ways a book is more graphic then a comic cause with comic you have the picture with a book all you have are the words on a page and your mind.  And believe me the minds is a scary place.

Rick: Still this is pretty cool I mean a Zombie Butcher!

{HOLDS UP SAME PICTURE.  BRISTEL HOLDS HER HANDS UP IN THE AIR!}

end Scene as crew get there food.

Scene exterior a hill in town behind the local college.

{KIDS ARE ENJOYING THE FRESHLY FALLEN SNOW KIDS ARE SLEDDING A GROUP STARTS A MEGA SNOW BALL FIGHT.  THE KIDS ARE HAVING ABALL THE EIGHT KIDS ARE TERRY, KELLY DOOR, BIFF, MICKEY DIRK GENTLY AND HEATHER LOCK AND COOL AND KIKY COLBER.  THE KIDS ARE NOW AROUND A CRACKLING FIRE SIPPING HOT CIDER.}

Heather: So Mickey hows John enjoying Calie?

Mickey: Tell you the truth I envy him at times then I think about these days and if I had nothing but sunny days I’d miss this.

Kelly: Really Mickey if I had my choice I’d trade in my gloves for surf board any day!

{COOL LOBBS A SNOW BALL AT KELLY.}

Kelly: Yup a Surf board is looking mighty nice!

{KELLY RETURNS THE FAVOR.}

Cool: Hey don’t get me wrong I like warm days but give me a sky slop and nice warm crackling fire to tell me I am a live.  I mean I don’t know what I would do If I never had winter to tell me how to enjoy my summers not to mention the skying.

Kelly: Go to the mountains!

{KELLY LOBBS ANOTHER SNOW BALL AT COOL THEN COOL LOBBS ANOTHER ONE MISSES HIS TARGET A HITS MICKEY WITH THE SNOW BALL.}

Mickey: Yup really envying my bro right now!

end scene


{MICKEY LOBBS A SNOW BALL AT COOL.  THE CREW CONVERSE A BIT MORE THEN WE JOIN MICKEY IN HER ROOM ON THE PHONE TALKING TO HER BRO.}

Scene interior Mickey Dents bed room.

Mickey: My friends are wondering how your doing Bro?

John: I am making it the question is how are you doing with out me?

Mickey: I am making it.

John: Hows Biff?

Mickey: Good his dad is progressing nicely threw AA.  Do you Miss winter?

John: Hmm for the time being No!

Mickey: Really you don’t miss snow balls and snow men sleds and toboggans?
John: Why when I got surf boards and babes in swim ware!

Mickey: Really {Mickey rolls her eyes.} Like your one for the ladies!

John: And whats that supposed to mean.

Mickey: It’s that your never been one too sport a six pack!

John: Ya but I do well in fact she is coming home with me for winter break!

Mickey: Wait you have been seeing someone?

John: Yup she’s from Minnesota so we have a lot of the same interest!

Mickey: Well homework is calling bro I am glade you found someone!

John: Thanks Kiddo now I have two ladies in my life.

Mickey: Who’s the other lady?

John: You kiddo

Mickey: Love you Bro!

John: Take care sport!

{MICKEY HANGS UP THE PHONE THINKS TO HERSELF IT NEVER CROSSED HER MIND THAT SHE WAS A LADY BUT REALIZING THAT HER TEEN YEARS ARE QUICKLY COMING ON TO HER AND THAT YES SHE WAS BECOMING A LADY.}

end epusode.